| Reviews for The Unfading Utopia! |
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   SB User chapter 1 . 9/14 The jordino is immunized against all dangers: one may call him a hack, incompetent, an edgy SI fag, lazy, it all runs off him like water off a raincoat. But call him a flaky quitter and you will be astonished at how he recoils, how injured he is, how he suddenly shrinks back: "I've been found out.".; |
| Borello chapter 1 . 2/22 interesting idea |
| KingAllen chapter 1 . 2/24/2019 Update this story please ~ |
| PhantomSnow13 chapter 1 . 9/1/2018 dude seriously? and this is such a good story. Come on man. Update. Please |
| Stratos263 chapter 1 . 4/6/2018 Good job on the start. Wow this is an amazing story idea. Hope this story gets updated. Good luck in real life |
| garystubatman chapter 1 . 1/6/2018 Death to naruto and all its shitty ass retarded fans. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. Kill yourself. |
| Abbadon44 chapter 1 . 12/5/2017 Interesting setup for a DxD story, I look forward to any more updates you may put out. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2017 I’ll never understand why people will make “fan” stories as a reward and then just abandon it pretty strange reward. |
| shirosaki666 chapter 1 . 10/9/2017 Strong opening. I like the interaction between Naruto and aurturia and can see how this could be with Naruto's wish for peace. please update |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2017 updated |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2017 Updated pleased |
| Mercurius Darkness chapter 1 . 9/13/2017 niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice |
| Alex2909 chapter 1 . 9/11/2017 love the pairing so far, awesome idea |
| insanemaelstorm chapter 1 . 9/4/2017 Pretty good prologue. Like how unique this is. Like naruto's ancestors. Like how his family tried to help aurturia. Like how she has been portrayed. Like how Naruto is making her strong. Can't wait to read more |
| Jay Leonardo chapter 1 . 8/12/2017 Amazing update please |
