| Reviews for Lone Traveler: World Left Behind |
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Guest chapter 19 . 4/24 Thank you for a wonderful story. I have missed B5, so it was nice to rejoin that universe again. |
AnthonyR89 chapter 14 . 2/17 one quibble about a previous chapter: you stated that the Ha'Tak came to Babylon 5 with a "full complement". a Ha'Tak can hold a hell of a lot more than 12 death gliders. |
KnowInsight chapter 19 . 6/18/2019 wow that was epic in both means of the word. |
Lerris chapter 19 . 1/12/2019 One common theme I see to these stories is things go remarkably well when the traveler interferes. About the only exception I see is at times it shifts a bit back to canon. The series is overall good, but this chapter seemed a bit rushed. Perhaps you could have just ended it with the shadow war? |
Me chapter 13 . 9/9/2018 So i initially read "Base formation Lambda!" As Base formation La Bamba. And snickered like a loon for about ten minutes be for rereading it correctly and feeling both disappointed and silly. |
Andorxor chapter 19 . 8/3/2018 Im a bit disappointed that we do not get a meeting between the slayers and the demon that tried to get exorcised on the station |
MalSer chapter 19 . 4/15/2018 I don't typically read Harry potter ff, but I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Well done and thanks for taking the time to write it for us to experience! |
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 19 . 3/23/2018 A great story here! |
Jimbocous chapter 19 . 12/23/2017 Nice! Thanks! |
BlazeStryker chapter 19 . 11/11/2017 Oh, dear, Garibaldi's Posthumous Run still happened, then! (For those that wonder or just forgot, the piece that inspired the episode title for *The Deconstruction Of Falling Stars* involved the return of militarism and the urge for conquest a thousand years after the end of the final Vorlon/Shadow War. The deconstruction was the militants' technical crews distilling all the records to make AI simulations of the Babylon Defenders, then have them act out horrific deeds for propaganda purposes. The thing is... they did it too well and Michael Garibaldi happened one last time. If you have never seen this one, I heavily recommend you do so. |
MattKennedy chapter 19 . 10/18/2017 Awesome story! I finally got around to reading this follow-up story and am very much glad that I did. :D |
tpx1 chapter 19 . 8/31/2017 great part in your series thank you for sharing! |
Araytigre chapter 19 . 8/28/2017 Fun! Glad that Valen and Deleen were able to "get together". It might have been interesting to see which ones the Tau'ri contingent stuck around to the end, other than the Goblins of course. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Thank You. TTFN |
creativesm75 chapter 19 . 8/21/2017 very, very good. |
Guest chapter 19 . 8/14/2017 Well done. The story is as wonderful as ever. The number of typos in the last half of the story was disappointing in comparison to your usual perfermance. Not tragic, of course. It's just that you've got such a large volume of work done better, that any relaxing of your standards tends to grab one's attention. By comparison, certain other authors on ffn typically are far worse. Some are so extreme and frequent that it can become literally painful to read, even if the underlying story is otherwise engaging. When you have to take time trying to decipher what was really meant, you start to lose the story to the clutter. When such clutter occurs too frequently, a subjective measure at best, eventually one has to decide whether it's worth the pain to continue that story or to switch one's attention to something more enjoyable. I'm struggling with that decision for KyuRasenKai's "Time for a power up" at the moment and expect to dump it soon. It would be a pretty decent Gamer-Naruto fic if there weren't so many major and minor glitches throughout. :-( |