Bon chapitre

" Wow this story is pretty shite, look up "SWBY: Chronicles of Remnant" by fanfic author "I Luvgrace420" for an ACTUAL story that doesn't give you aids like this one."

The ANBU...

Damn, Sasori ded, but his death, I would say was... serene, ... calm, and even... peaceful. Also this chapter, I think you made a really good decision to make it only focused on Naruto, but please could ya kill someone, a leaf guy preferably, right now. AND HIKARI DOES NOT COUNT!

And also I just realized, Sasori never told Naruto about the meeting with Kabuto, so does the Tenchi bridge arc not happen? Also Itachi is here I guess.

Now for two major predictions. Naruto will not get Shisui-Eye Crow, as he doesn't even care about Sasuke as much. Also Gaara ded permanently becuz no TnJing Chiyo into suicidal resurrection.

So Chapter rating is 8.7/10. Enjoyed it, but man did those realisations/predictions hit hard.

Im undecided on how I feel about the scene with Dark & Light Naruto.
Mostly on the overall result and how it was handled.

Dark Naruto felt more like Traumatized Naruto. He didn't really show off the Anger and Hate that a Jinchuuriki bottles up from being universally despised all their life. So I'm not quite sure if the name Yami Naruto is actually appropriate for him.

Light Naruto was pretty spot on, given what he's supposed to represent. It does worry me though. If Naruto has essentially rejected those beliefs, then what kind of person will he become.

The Sasori scene was pretty great. Good job there, I don't think it could have been done any better.

So, I'm guessing Itachi either has a clone dealing with Sakura and Kakashi or he has them in a Genjutsu... or he just ran lol. I assume he's there to talk spy stuff with Naruto. Maybe tell him a bit of the truth of things. I have a feeling that whatever he's there for, its gonna all be about Sasuke and not at all about Akatsuki.

-TCM

What an excellent story, written with real thought, realistic and engaging. Very well done.

For your review answer section question ... I never understood why people put them in the story chapters. It simply bloats the chapter, whether it's at the beginning or end. If you want to answer them directly, if it's something major, you can address it in the story or in an AN.
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Thank you for the read.

Aw man I'm gonna miss that little Yang kid.
Chapter was great! I really liked seeing how you handled Naruto's internal debates, and the fight scenes were well done as well.

I'm always been a fan of making enemies likeable or at least written in a way that makes you feel for them. Really makes their defeat that much more impactful.

Really interested to see how Itachi is gonna handle this. Is he gonna actually try to capture Naruto, his brother's best friend and his village's jinchuriki or is he gonna let him go?

As for the poll, I think it's fine if you answer a few important questions, but the thanks and all that can be done in pms. Other than that, you could try incorporating answers within the chapters.

I'm excited for the rest!

Love the chapter! The death scene was really touching, especially the part where he thought about the meaning of happiness. I hope he can find peace in the afterlife... Also I'm excited to see whats up with Itachi! Stay safe 3

Thank you!

The psychological turn of the fight was quite interesting. It was strange to see the Hikari and Yami parts of Naruto. So, with Hikari gone and Yami remaining, Naruto is still unbalanced, right?

Sasori' sharing the same moment as Sakura with Naruto was good. We missed the Kabuto angle. Still, it would be good to see how Naruto dates against Sasuke in the next arc.

Kudos

Great chapter! Ying Naruto leaving was really sad but it will help Narutos thought process and confidence. Naruto and Sasoris conversation on his death bed was really deep and I enjoyed that. Hearing Sasoris final thoughts almost made me sad even after all the terrible things he has done. Looking forward to more!

Wow, that was badass. Sasori definitely couldn't handle a serious Naruto. I'm actually quite glad that you changed the Yami Naruto, in canon he didn't really feel very fleshed out. I'll be looking forward to seeing whether or not Itachi will reveal himself as a spy to Naruto. I always enjoy seeing you actually write a short response to my reviews, it makes the reader feel a lot of involved. The length of answers compared to actual story is very good as well, I've seen a fic before in which the AN was a fourth of the chapter and the answers another forth, which lead to the fic not actually being 80k words long in total but only around 40k. Thanks for the update!

This was a very good chapter. Naruto’s character development is very well done. I love that he has resolved to kill bad people to fulfil his goals, and at the same time has learned that those same people have nuances to them (which don’t excuse them, but serve to make Naruto more conflicted after killing them.)

This has become my favourite Naruto fanfic, I can’t wait for more. Have fun writing!

Great chapter. I love how Naruto finally accepted that killing is necessary for his goals. That Sasori death scene gave me some Demon Slayer vibes, it was really well written. Wonder what Itachi is going to say to Naruto, guess I’ll have to wait and see. Looking forward to the next update.