Your Light Up Series totally caught my attention. I love it! You write Katniss so well. I think that is one of the most challenging aspects of any Hunger Games fanfiction, to write Katniss in character. She is stoic and aloof, in a way, and yet still full of incredible emotion. She doesn't process emotion well at all and doesn't easily recognize it, either. So, how does one write a girl such as her falling in love? You write her in a way that seems believable. She always cared for Peeta from the moment he showed her kindness by giving her bread. And for every act of kindness he showed throughout the series, she reluctantly respected and cared for him more. You have done such a lovely job building upon that notion. I'm on to the next story.

I discovered your page 3 nights ago. And since then I've slept a sum total of 4 hours because I CANNOT STOP READING THROUGH THE NIGHT. ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! Your writing is a million times better than the books, it's insane! YOU NEED TO NE A PUBLISHED AUTHOR. I'D BUT EVERY BOOK. For now I'll satisfy myself reading these and cry when I'm done. Definitely re-reading though. You are remarkable.

Mrs. Everdeen is everything in this chapter. I've never seen a story where she is like that. I love it. it was amazing

I just realized Snow should've called Peeta's name and had Haymitch volunteer. Haymitch is the brains of everything. If Haymitch and Katniss were reaped and killed, Peeta would be destroyed. He wouldn't be able to do anything without Katniss, knowing he failed to save Katniss. If Peeta and Katniss died in the arena, Haymitch would still spend the rest of his life plotting against the Capitol

Awesome

This was wonderful. You did a phenomenal job, especially these last few chapters with the action.

Clever and so freaking sad

FINALLY

Who is Katniss trying to protect on Sundays? Cause based on her avoidance with Gale on the subject of her relationship with Peeta, she is being completely inappropriate. She's going to hurt Peeta badly.

"... I haven't felt like a child since I spit the boy from District 9's blood on the forest floor." I actually think this goes back to her after her father's death.

I love the way you write them together. They're so romantic in a non sappy way.

500x better than canon.

*tears* *smiles*

That was the most painfully beautiful, or perhaps beautifully painful, thing I have ever read. I applaud you.

Another great story. I'm about to read the next installment. I can't stop lol!

While reading the Tribute Triathlon, I was cheering for these guys. Woot!

Great sequel. Headed on to numero tres. Thanks for sharing!

Holy shit! I came across this series last night. I finished part one and I am so hooked! This is so much more heartbreaking with them in love and Katniss beat before she goes up in the tube - gah! Another sleepless night for me so I can finish this story lol