omg

thumbs up from me. very good

First off, I'm really enjoying this so far. You're a good writer, and you capture Peter's awkwardness perfectly without it seeming forced.

Secondly, Grace's illness has me curious. Neurological, jerking movements, headaches, daydreaming spells, etc.? My guess would be epilepsy or at the very least myoclonic and absence seizures, but as an epileptic myself, I think I may be a bit biased. Maybe MS (the slower kind, not the deadly one)?

Either way, you're doing a great job so far, and I eagerly await more! :)

Cute :)

Can't wait for more!

Ahhh no and it ends!

Ah, well. At least the 'he knows Spanish' thing is out of the way. And we learned a bit about her condition, and her mom's side of the family.

There's still much more to learn, though, and I'm really looking forward to finding out. I really like Grace. She's a very multidimensional character. She's almost like Tony, but with an actual capacity to be serious in daily life. She's does have that whole neurological disorder hanging over her head, though. I wonder if that's something the Wakandans could fix? I also wonder what it is, specifically.

Thanks for writing this, it's excellent so far!

This is really good so far.

I like Grace a lot, and I'm curious about this mysterious illness she needs to take medication for. I sense a major plot point!

I do not at all understand her thing for Bill Skarsgard, though. I very much think his brother Alexander is there better looking of the two. Fun fact you may be aware of already: their dad also plays Erik Selvig in Thor/Avengers.

I LOVED THIS!

Loving it so much! When will you post a new chapter?

Nice chap

Great chapter
Don’t worry about updating
Take your time and continue working hard at school

Love the chemistry between the two! I’m excited to see how their friendship plays out!

Nice chapter!

Wonderful! :)
Update immediately, please!

I love.