Nice one.

Interesting and (well enough written in my opinion) very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Looking forward to the next post and thank you so much for sharing.

Wow, brutal but very effective. I like it a lot.

Well done. I had to look up some lingo, but I think that specificity added to the story.

No way in hell would JKR allow Harry to have it as good as he does in this! She's all about torturing the good guy but allowing the bad guys, Fumblewhore included, to get away with whatever they want! Two wars as one of Riddle's inner circle and both times he bought his way out of Azkaban along with his family! So this way is so much better. The Death Eaters are all dead along with their fearless half-blood leader! Not to mention almost all the former Dark Alined Pureblood families men folk are also pushing up Daisies. Thus it falls to Harry, Neville and the Weasley twins to repopulate Briton's magical world. None of the other good guys chose to step up and help so they're Shit Out of Luck as well. Of course that assumes that they're alive to begin with. And with Riddle running around killing any and everyone he wanted to, all because Fumblewhore insisted that the average citizen of the magical world not defend him/herself by killing their attackers, they likely paid with live of their selves and families. Trust Fumblewhore to get everyone else killed while saving his own ass.

this is good but it feels incomplete, there was no build up

Well of course you already know that neither Dumbledore nor the Ministry of/for Morons did anything at al to even slow Riddle down. Thus many more then needed to died. This in turn allowed Harry and those who believed in him to fight the war in a way that would truly end it. You can bet when Harry dies, Dumbles'll waiting to give him the old bullshit line about how killing murders, rapists, arsonist and tortures of the innocents was going Dark. Or, if he got what he truly had coming to him, he's down with Hades being taught how wrong and stupid he was. I agree with you about using this way to fight and destroy Riddle and all the other Blood Purests. But I can never see Fumbles the Great EVER allowing it to come to pass. He's either a Blood Supremacist himself or a Dark Lord masquerading as a Light wizard or he could be both.

Interesting.

Interesting setup.

Liked it! But, way too much happening for so short a one shot.

Excellent!

Very very good. Nice small unit ops.

very cute way to solving the stupid 'prophecy' although rape as punishment is still rape, and an automatic death penalty in my book.
thanks for sharing

Great short story and thanks for sharing!

nuke him from orbit, its the only way to be sure