please update this story soon.

Looking forward to season 2.

Great story so far.

Great story so far.

Please update!

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Jason reminds me of kevin levin ben 10 alien force when it comes to his car.

For a moment I thought he was the son of sabertooth. Guess I was wrong.

For a joke later have kitty and jess have to go upstairs to reach there location which kitty goes correctly but then halfway up turns to see jess walking straight past the stairs which could cause her to scream about how shes going the wrong way

And later have a point where they have to reach a certain location and jasons the last one to arrive and when he sees jess he could say how did you get here before me to which her response could be what happened did you get lost which jason has a silent pause then practically screams where the hell did you learn that word

For a funny running joke have cyclops call jasons phone and it goes to voicemail but it sounds as if its not a voicemail and it seems like jasons in trouble untill at the end of the voicemail he says elaborate voicemail hoax

Since it seems scott and jason have started on the path of being friends have a part where theyre teaming up and do a awesome combo then without looking at each other fist bump

And for a combo of kitty and jess have jess create a barrier around kitty and have kitty phase through to punch bad guys and i wonder what jess can do with training and what her x-men costume looks like can i suggest something like what jeanne d arc/ruler wears in apocrypha just replace the armour pieces hell you could keep the armour on her hands so jess can make sure it hurts when she hits someone

That was an awesome way to finish up the first season of the story. Cool to see Jess now with Jason and Jason and Scott burying the hatchet between them.

I have a feeling jason is gonna try to stop jess ship from setting sail any way that he can and i cant wait to see how

After i proofread the top part i have to say pun not intended that was completely accidental

Can i make a suggestion for later perhaps in dark phoenix arc have jason and kitty be prepared to die together cause its one thing to be with who you love its another to die together and i find that gives the deepest meaning of love

i mean just look at anju and kafei from legend of zelda majoras mask it is the first time a video game made me cry

Ok we've been waiting on deadpool for a long time now and can i just say ive thought scott was a dick the entire time and i just wanted to kill him but he eventually became a nice guy kinda like how in Kingdom Hearts Riku was portrayed as a dick and ended up being awesome and stuff and here are some marvel characters i would like to see make an appearance Ghost Rider, Punisher, Spider-Man, Iron Man, The Hulk, Venom could make an appearance because he has made a symbiote version of nearly everyone including Wolverine and even Groot believe it or not, X-23, Fantastic Four or the avengers could have a team up with the X-men, The Sinister six, anyway i ended up screaming when i saw you posted chap 17 anyway i look forward to more