| Reviews for Tempest |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 10/20/2019 i offer my sport to you threw this hard time |
 GuardianXAngel chapter 4 . 10/11/2017 I hope your brother is okay, and pray for his quick recovery. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/29/2017 so sorry to hear that your brother will be in my prayers |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/29/2017 Good luck for the future |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/29/2017 Hope he gets well soon And you have my support |
| BrotherCaptainSheperd chapter 4 . 8/30/2017 Damn. I hope he gets well soon. |
| ReadsWayTooMuch chapter 4 . 8/29/2017 I'm sorry to hear about your brother. I hope he heals soon. |
| geetac chapter 4 . 8/29/2017 I hope he feels better? |
| CreedMaster chapter 4 . 8/29/2017 hope he gets better, I'm sure you will write ok in his stead. |
| Xivitai chapter 4 . 8/29/2017 Well, good luck to your brother. Hope he will recover soon. |
| jmood chapter 4 . 8/29/2017 Hope your brother gets well soon. |
| SinisterXP chapter 4 . 8/28/2017 Hope for a swift recovery. |
| PlagiarismIsBad chapter 1 . 7/21/2017 Dude, this is nearly an exact copy of Deprived by The Crimson Lord. If you're going to plagiarize/take ideas, at least make it less obvious. |
| Smutley Do-Wrong chapter 3 . 7/13/2017 Possibly update bloatware touchpal flipped on some unsupervised spell check, creating misspellings. Corrections: This REALLY IS "seer-ing" figure canon. FUTURE canon. It's like your Dumbles thinks the birth canal a launch tube for Voldy seeking birth baby MISSLE. |
| Hoegh chapter 3 . 7/15/2017 I love this story please update soon |
