Awesome chapter keep it up :)

Awesome chapter keep it up :)

Please post the next chapter soon I need some Azel-Obi-Wan talk! I’m dying!

I really like this story! I also enjoy how I noticed your style of writing improve throughout the chapters, and became more descriptive and it flows really well. I like the background and I actually didn't expect her to be a Skywalker, and I usually ALWAYS see stuff like that coming, so good job on that! I look forward to your further updateskeep up the good work!

Awesome chapter keep it up :)

I normally stay away from oc's, but honestly, this is one of the rare good ones. I like how the potential relationship is being set up and not rushed. I also like the many nods to other canon characters. Great job so far and I'm anxious to read more!

I love the story so far! It is awsome. Please update!

more?

Great!