Those are some really awful ways to die, omgsh, poor Rip!

No, I refuse to believe they're dead!

I like this story. Feels like it needs a sequel. :)

This story was awesome! I got so many feels reading it, it was so good. Rip is my absolute fav character, and you write him so well! Please write more!

UGH THIS IS TOO MUCH FOR ME I LOVE IT SO MUCH HOW DO YOU DARE TO MAKE SOMETHING SO FREAKING BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING AGH FML Anyway, this was such a nice ending for such a lovely fic and I want so bad to read more of you soon. But for now I have to reread this entire fic because I absolutely loved it.

I'm going to re-read all of your stories because of how amazing all of them are I'm serious this is like my third or fourth time reading your stories for Legends of tomorrow!

Absolutely love it!

You made such a brilliant point about the Time Masters and how not all of them were evil. That never even occurred to me. Just brilliant.

As always, I love the chemistry with the team (especially with Rip and how he feels about the team and how they responded - genius idea) and I always feel as if I'm watching the show.

Overall, great writing, great interaction with the characters, and an absolutely fantastic story.

Cotdammit, this so good! I just... love it so much... agh, I really don't know what to say. My first attempt to review was basically "shit shit shit shit fucking shit this is fucking good" but I think you deserve something more than that. Much than that. I just love your fic. And I would love to see more!

What's the last chapter going to be about?
BTW I love your stories for LOT especially the ones centered around Rip! Do you have any more stories you plan to write with him? If so I'd love to read them.

So one more chapter to cover recovery? Recover and getting better/healing chapters are always the best part of h/c fanfics. I really love this story, just so much. Yes, the Rip angst was perfect, I take back what I said in my last review about needing to draw it out more, this is perfect. Thank you for writing it, can't wait for more

Pfffftttt my fav time travelers won't die that easily

Awesome story!
it's really well written and I like all the little details.
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
well done!

Ooooooh, chapter three is going to be interesting. Part of me half hopes Rip isn't actually getting rescued so quickly (I'm a really terrible person, I'm so, so sorry) because I really like drawn out Rip angst and part of me is just wondering where this goes. Because the whole fic is wonderfully written and I love it and I am really looking forward to Rip's rescue, I'm just weird and like to see a lot of angst first, I don't know but I love this soooo much and I've been waiting forever for this chapter and I'm so happy with how you wrote it

YES.
Just yes, this chapter is amazing! I am so so glad I got to read this before bed. You're amazing, and this story has me hooked. Thank you so so much for sharing this!

Wow. That was...wow. For a while there, you actually had me a bit convinced that this fic was heading for the dreaded character death zone; definitely would qualify. But...now, um, I don't think it is? I mean, if the third chapter turns out how it looks like it's turning out. but also, it's not at all advisable to ignore the possibility for twists and turns with your stories. This was amazing though. Like, seriously, horrifyingly good. Really well written. I've said this before, and I'll keep saying it, but you're really an incredible writer, and by my vote, definitely the best writer for this fandom. thanks again, so much, for writing for us and keeping it going despite everything. you're the best xx