will you continue?

Make more chapters

Please don't tell me this is an Amour fic _

Good start for a fanfic...I just hope this isn't Amour...ugh sorry it's a BIG turn off for me with fanfics. Anyway good job!

This one is good looking forward to the next chapter.

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

the Promise of Reunion reference is actually a ending in the game Ib, which in my opinion is literally the best ending that game has (though I still think there should be a ending where Ib, Mary, & Garry escape; sadly there isn't.)

Also, how is Bonnie going to convince her father to let her travel with Ash. He wouldn't of minded in canon because she was with her older brother; but she'll be traveling with 2 strangers.

I wish you continue it...

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Promise of Reunion is a reference to Ib, since Ib gave Garry her handkerchief.

So Bonnie will travel with Ash, but not Clemont? This will be interesting.

Good intro to the story. It is nice to have Ash super bad. I just wish the anime was a lot better with Him winning some Pokemon League Championships and with him getting Riolu at the beginning of his Pokemon Journey.

Ash should have been a Pokemon League Champion of the Kanto Region in the anime.

I would also like Ash and Misty traveling across Kanto, Orange Islands, Jhoto, Hoenn, Sinnoh, Unova, Decolore, Kalos, Alola and more.

Can't wait to see what happens next

Interesting chapter...beta offer is still open, though I'd appreciate a reply if you're declining, just so I know :)

I have to admit that this is not a bad Kalos remake story. I wonder when Clemont even going to appear?

Yea ash and serna are togehter again and I like that he serna and Bonnie all have powers very cool

Great introduction! I'm very interested to see how the story progresses from here. If you want, i could beta read for you :) PM me if you're interested!

Nice beginning to the story, though I will say to you to make sure Ash doesn't get too OP. While I personally don't mind an overpowered Ash (I really like reading stories where Ash has to super bad*** mode on the bad guys to be honest with you), please make sure that when battles do happen with other trainers, like in the Kalos league if you eventually get there, Ash doesn't just sweep all these trainers like a training practice. Besides that, the usual nitpicky stuff like grammar and spelling, as far as I can tell, is very nice.