Reviews for Achromatopsia
mdmpinkie9088 chapter 6 . 5/5/2018
Okay, my explanation for this story:
Maybe Alex is just colorblind. Like, colorblind as in “theres something wrong his eyes and he cant see color, even if he meets his soulmate” colorblind. Maybe, maybe not? Thats just my headcanon.
If you do write a sequel to this, can it be like, “alex broke his arm or something minor like that and the doctors explain that he can never see color but he’ll still feel the tingles”
Nice story, btw :3
Guest chapter 6 . 11/13/2017
I love it! I swear I could see the black and white. It was beautifully written.
Jester chapter 6 . 8/14/2017
I JUST REALIZED SOMETHING ALEX IS ACTUALLY COLOR BLIND AS IN HE WILL NEVER SEE COLOR AND JOHN IS HIS SOUL MATE I'M DYING THEY'LL NEVER REALLY KNOW AND JOHN WILL BE DYING INSIDE BECAUSE HE THINKS HE'S ACTUALLY NOT ALEX'S SOUL MATE BUT THEY ARE
Elfin-Victory chapter 6 . 8/11/2017
WHAAAT? nO. I thought you were building up to a big *colours* moment at the end! I AM FLOORED
PJOandHP4Life chapter 6 . 8/10/2017
The fluff in this chapter was too adorable for me, but I needed that right now so thank you. I'm a bit sad the story is ending, but I'm happy that they're happy you know? I hope you continue to write more in the future. I look forward to reading more of your work. : )
MakeDauntlessCakeNotWar chapter 6 . 8/10/2017
Plot twist, Hamilton is just colorblind.

Really did love this story, I got excited every time it was updated. Will miss.
Elfin-Victory chapter 5 . 8/9/2017
Dead. Dead. I have been killed.
The Silvernote chapter 5 . 8/6/2017
Aw, I wonder why it didn't work, I loved this chapter though, can't wait for more
PJOandHP4Life chapter 5 . 8/4/2017
Why did you hurt him?! Why?! Alex was a mess as it was now he won't even get out of bed! WHY?!
LamsNotLambs chapter 5 . 8/4/2017
J, M, E, or T? John Laurens, James Madison, Eliza Schuyler, Thomas Jefferson? Coincidence? I think not. (note: please don't make this a Hamliza story unless you really want to but I don't think you will but whatever)
MakeDauntlessCakeNotWar chapter 5 . 8/3/2017
Ahhhhhhh! I hate myself for loving this. Frustration.
slug-cat chapter 1 . 8/2/2017
So good please write more, I'm getting very impatient about them not being soulmates yet. Write more please!
Tayalaya chapter 4 . 7/30/2017
VERY GOOD STORY I LIKES IT

KEEP WRITING!
PJOandHP4Life chapter 4 . 7/29/2017
Yay! You updated! Writers block is such a pain. I'm glad you persevered through it! Can't wait for the next update.
TheLovableKillerWhale chapter 3 . 7/28/2017
I wonder who "Maddie" ran off with ;)
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