| Reviews for Lovers Reunite |
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Guest chapter 2 . 6/15/2019 I can't read this further. It's so ooc and explanatory that it feels like a chore to read. Try more descriptions and action rather than "I sat, I looked, I dissed the entire system without understanding it first." No struggles with a child's body and mind, no conflicting personalities, no empathy for anyone but two people in the universe, no moral exploration. This isn't Naruto you're writing about. This is an OC and an OP one at that. AND we don't even get to see how the canon characters are affected. |
Viro Blade chapter 13 . 6/9/2019 Keep up with the great work! Got to say, love the story. Can't wait for more! :-) |
Jiraiya's will chapter 13 . 5/29/2019 Please update |
Jiraiya's will chapter 13 . 5/29/2019 Nice. Please update as soon as possible |
Guest chapter 13 . 3/30/2019 I like Narutos relationship with Manda and any chance of Naruto x Kaguya x Anko ? i hope you continue this story |
Lord Redshocker chapter 13 . 3/27/2019 I liked the chapter i hope u will continue this story! |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/10/2019 That's an interesting story you got there. |
Guest chapter 13 . 3/8/2019 Nice update |
Oblivion196 chapter 13 . 3/9/2019 It’s awesome that you’re back. |
Djberneman chapter 13 . 3/8/2019 Glad that you have resumed the story. |
XenoLucifer chapter 10 . 3/8/2019 You write your story as if it's a formal letter. Try to improve your writing skills. |
zehendner chapter 13 . 3/7/2019 Can't wait for more chapter's |
Valkipher chapter 2 . 12/2/2018 This is badly written. |
Umar Elkot chapter 12 . 10/9/2018 I think the story is very awesome ,and the steady base is OK ,so please continue |
Lordcarroty chapter 12 . 9/27/2018 Great story so far please continue making more chapters for Lovers Reunite? |