love this

This was an incredible story! I’d love a sequel if you ever wanted to write one! Thank you so much for writing this!

HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME FEEL SO MANY FEELS but in all seriousness this is actually amazing and I adore the way you've written this with such raw emotions, it's beautiful and heart-breaking and absolutely gorgeous. I love Tony's love for Peter and his vengeance is so understandable! The addition of the other characters is brilliant and the pain is so painful I could feel it, thank you for such a lovely fic!

Fantastic and spot on characterization. Reader Me wants more more in this storyline. But Writer Me respects that these aren’t easily expanded. One thing I really like is the way you don’t flinch from long passages of descriptive text. When writing this way, where the reader is inside the characters head (and not just observing from an objective seat at the action) it gives a sense of really being there with the character. Because humans think in long unbroken passages, you see. Can’t wait to see what else you do.

I wasn't ready boi...I wasn't ready

This was amazing! You really captured Spider-man's character and exactly how he'd react in that situation. Loving the relationship between Tony and Peter as well :)

I absolutely loved this! You have an amazing voice and writing style and such a talent for making characters act and speak like they would in the movies. Keep up the great work! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more!

"Someone at Wendy's had said the same thing last week when they forgot Peter's fries." Owww, that cuts deep; I work at a fast food restaurant and I DO say sorry all the time ... if I think about anything else other than fries right now though, I really will cry!

I love your dialogue (and the rest of it is wonderful). It's snappish in a way that makes it feel like it could be canon in one of the movies (Homecoming, eeek).

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wonderful and heartfelt! Please make a ch2! :D

Oh my gosh so depressing but written so well. I could see what I was reading and I almost cried. Literally have tears in the corners of my eyes. Good job. Thank you for writing :)