i vote harem a harem 4 girls and up a multi 3 girls 2 girls is a double and then 1 girl is single i dont know how to vote

The first thing a story needs is to be ... readable. Reading your story is a chore, that is not good.
Just look at it, basically huge blocks of text with dialogue mashed up with regular narrative. It is a pain to even look it it, leat alone try and read it. I skipped ahead and the problem is not fixed in later chapters.
Next problem, character portrayal. Mostly entered around your Kurama ... why is he friendly? Or rather she (nothing against that). It is alright to make characters different, but not out of the blue, it just feels weird. Especially considering that the current portrayal doesn't make that much sense.
Pairings ... well, that is up to you. Pairings depend on character portrayal. Some pairings work in one story, but they do not in others, because characters are different and events that occur are different. I can live with any pairing if it is done well. The worst you can do is base pairings on voting, because people will vote for their favourite pairing, and that particular pairing might not work in your story no matter what you do. So that is what you have to decide on and plan out.
Harems. I suggest you avoid harems. Reason is simple, they tend to be horrible. I only know a handful of stories where harems actually worked and made sense. A regular two person relationship generally provides far more depth and emotions. Quality over quantity, not the opposite. Considering that you are new to this ... avoid harems.
Bashing. Well, basically this is a degradation of characters for a purpose of some kind of satisfactions. In other words, it is a bad idea. Bashing reduces the quality of the story, because you ruin character portrayal. Even if you don't like particular characters, do not degrade them.
Ocular bloodline surpassing byakugan and sharingan. Alright a new and original ability is an awesome concept when done well. So if it is unique and not overpowered, great.
Main idea for the story ... umm, there is no idea. You have a concept of Naruto having a powerful bloodline. So? That is not enough for a story. The story is based around characters, their interactions and development. An ability adds flavour, but the story can't be based just around that.
So, that is about it. Many problems, but some ideas do have merit. There is potential here, but needs much work. Most flaws are easily fixed, but require time and effort. Overall, not a very good start so far, but not without a based you may build upon.

You have the story set as complete. Oh and you should really space out the paragraphs more, it has a tendency to melt together and push away potential readers if you leave it in big chunks as you have. I like the concept though, I'm not sure if I'll like how you portray everyone but I will stick around to make sure. This is a nice beginning chapter, especially for a complete beginner. Good luck with the rest of the story!

what girls should I use and give an explanation why please, and thank you very much.

With 1 girl or harem I beg of you not to use Hinata or sakura since theirs to many stories of them and Naruto...Too much Naruhina SUCKS and narusaku is just wrong if you think about it

ANyway not a bad start and good luck with your writing