This was really cute! Yes, that's the best way for me to describe it lol.

I think you did well capturing Ruby's lack of attraction towards anyone prior to Weiss and Weiss' lack of physical intimacy prior to meeting Ruby. I found it amusing that Ruby was the leader rather than the follower as well which fit with your narrative.

Keep up the great work!

Wow. I loved it. It was really good. Just ignore those other two reviews. They don't mean sh*t. This was really good. I can't wait to read more of your writing.

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