You made my heart, broke my heart and began to put it back together again all in a few thousand words. Beautiful, just beautiful.

Damn it woman! You had to go there? I had to know when I saw how perfect things were going and how Gene kept thinking of them as unbreakable, as a team, as something that will never revert back to what it was... And then you included the shooting and that whole sequence in the ambulance HURT! IT ALL HURT! it was all so good and then so so so painful and GODDAMN IT WOMAN YOU AND YOUR TALENT!

Brilliant story.

Great story, thank you ! I've only just discovered your Ashes to Ashes fan fiction. It's REALLY good !

I really enjoyed this, Mindy35 - the characterisation was spot on, and as for the heat level ... *fans self*

Hoping to see more from you very soon! :)

Very believable - fits perfectly with the "official" narrative (only better!). Fantastic characterisation as always.

*gasps* Well this is just...I don't think my review can do justice to it. Needless to say I loved it (and agreed, I think this is the perfect moment in canon for them to get it together. As much as I love the True scene in the light of S3 it felt a little rushed). So many levels of sexy here, and all so true (pardon the pun). Alexandra - yes! Loved that. And don't get me started on the gloves *fans self* The morning after with just as much lust (and more than that) was lovely, and the final scene heartbreaking.

(I also appreciated the choice of song - not that I'm a fan but ever since the reference in the cast quiz I can't help wanting a Hunt and Drake duet ;) )

Thank you for another wonderful read!

Another beautiful job. More please...? :D

I loved this. Lovely, smutty and heartbreaking all at the same time.

Well done! Gene and Alex are written very true to character. I wonder if you would consider continuing the story with more chapters.