Lol silly Liv thinking El has no interest in her xD

i love this book so much, aahh they’re so cute 3

Great story

This was such a lovely story, and it's very ironic that I read it during such cold, rainy days here where I live, trying to picture the beautiful beach and the warm climate. lol
I've said this about other stories of yours, but in this one you might have outdone yourself: I love the pace you set for the changes in their relationship, you make something that we've never seen on the show seem so in character it almost feels like canon. I absolutely loved their first kiss on the grass watching the fireworks, and I love their fight right before making love for the first time, these two are too intense to simply fall into bed together even after several lovely vacation days in paradise. lol
Finishing the story with a few more days for them to spend all alone on vacation was a nice touch and a lovely ending.

My favorite line? "I hope it's a long movie!" :-)

Lovely. Thank you.

I LOVE that they were THEM and shouted and said the wrong things and fought and almost screwed everything up.

I like that you had Elliot be the one who realized that HE had to put it on the line first; Olivia is just...too brittle about how people feel about her, too often disappointed and left behind.

"The world it is." PERFECT line.

This chapter was so lovely...them having just a lovely, quiet amount of time together.

Awwww. I LOVE the carnival and cooling evening temps and them watching fireworks together.

I LOVE Olivia teasing him with the suit. And her getting freckles! I LOVE her freckles!

And her contemplation about how DIFFERENT it must be to grow up around people...very nice.

Just re-read this and I love it even more!

Love this story! Can’t wait to see if you do another ?

I LOOVVEE THISSS

This is one of my favorites. You did an amazing job with this story. It just unfolded perfectly.
-Nikki-

Great story

So glad they sort it out