That was pretty good for a fanatic I do say so myself and I'm actually impressed also can you make a second part to this please.

You know, ky favorite stories tend to be those with sickeningly sweet, sensual fluff, and this was a perfect example. Short, full of sweet emotion, and the point. Just wish there was a scene of them waking up.

9/10, good fucking job.

It is a good story to read

10/10

I've read a few of these and I can say yours is as good as any. Ya did done gud. Lol.
See you next time.