Pleaseeeee update you left us hanging i love Alex and hatty

This story is awesome, please update it...

Sheesh, Iset is such a baby, she cries over everything that wimp. Wouldn't be surprised if she cried over Siamun saying 'excuse me'. Please...

Hilarious! Brilliant! i just had to mention this chapter!

"Hey squirt, you got the goods?" Rick asked quietly.

Cleo nodded, smiling, and showed him the frog...toad...whatever.

Rick nodded, glee on his face. "Good. We are going to have some fun tonight."

nearly WET myself! I just love the idea that Rick put her up to it- what a complete kid! hahahaha!

hey! i wasnt gonna read this fic, coz it looks kinda long, but i was bored so i thought "I'll just read the first chapter..." and here i am on chapter three!

liking it so far, as the Medjai are my favourite aspect of the mummy films. I think ur doing a great job of representing their culture.

i loved this line;

"I am not a wife. Not yet. I am still a bride."

what a subtle and eloquent way of expressing the fact that their marriage has not been consumated!

One thing i cant quite get my head around though- why is Sihathor's mother so cold and vindictive? I mean i understand her disappointment that her first born was a daughter, but surely she would have to be a total bitch not to feel anything at all for her own flesh and blood? would ardeth really have married such a poisonous old harpy?

i hope she gets hit by a bus- yes, i know its unlikely in the middle of the sahara...

kay, catcha later

Oh, I am intrigued. Why are these men after the O'Connells?

*eats popcorn and waits for more*

You can't just leave it hanging! I love this story, becuase you put together Ardeth's world and the O'Connells very nicely. I'm definitely lookig forward to the next bit.

Elisabeth

I love your story!

Please keep up the good work and keep the chapters a comin'!

The Mummy rules! And Brendan Fraser is HOT!

Yikes! Siamun found out where Iset is going each day! And of course, that dirty dog-mama of his had a hand in it. Mercy, I can't stand that woman!

Really great job with Hathy and Alex! And Cleo, I just adore Cleo. She is a straight-shooter, I like that.

LuWanda(Lula)

Hey! I just finished reading all of it and it's a very very VERY good story. Don't keep us waiting long for the next update.

Nice practice scene with Iset, Ardeth and her brothers. Very visual, I likes it!

Cleo wants Hathy to teach her! Very nice!

Interesting story!

LuWanda(Lula)

I betcha anything Hathy is pregnant. Sounds like it to me, yep.

Ugh, Ursula is one character I definitely do not like! And Cleo! Have mercy, she loves to antagonize Ursula..I love it! I love her come-backs!

Whoa, very interesting! Ardeth is going to train Iset? Nice! And yes, I absolutely loved the fact that Mia's bubble burst when Iset told her about Lord Bay's already choosing someone to help Iset learn.

Sheret..mercy..what a slick one! Sounds like she's rather indescriminate about her pickins as long as they wear pants, lol.

I really like 'your' characters very much!

LuWanda(Lula)

Sorry I'm so late in reading this, I've been playing catch-up, as life hasn't been too kind lately.

Poor Hathy, she thinks Alex wants a subservient wife! She is trying so hard to please him.

Finally! Iset broke Siamun's resistance down! I didn't think he'd be able to hold out much longer, but good for her in provoking his response.

Very interesting story!

LuWanda(Lula)

hi, i luv ur story. totally awesome. please update! put in chapter 7! i can't wait for it! i write for , my nickname is bringmetolife. i would rly appreciate it if you would read my stories- 'New York Sunrise' and 'Bring Me To Life'. you wont regret it! UPDATE WITH CHAPTER SEVEN!

brilliant! *stands up and claps* encore encore! lol, cant wait for the next chapter my friend! power to cleo for telling that bitch off! lol

cleo seems older than she is, besides shes kool, cuz ursula would never hurt a 9 year old.. lol i hope!

rite im off to read some more updates, i hope urs will soon join my pile!

~*~Bails~*~