| Reviews for The Hunter and The Butterfly |
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ellinor chapter 35 . 8/9/2018 Hello again! These last chapters... wow! They were incredible! You've made a damn good job with writing them. You've created a unbelievable suspense and I was just hoping that this all will lead to an "happy" ending... God, you're pretty good at writing violent scenes... My respects! But the best thing: This is the James Keziah Delaney I know! How can anyone not love this man? And you're absolutely right. Sometimes he just has this look in his eyes that you could easily confuse him with a "mental patient" XD (loved that passage!) I only thing I need now to absolutely admire your story is a fluffy, pink and romantical ending after this tragedy... 'Til then I will look for new updates every second of my freetime ;) All the best! ellinor |
ellinor chapter 29 . 7/4/2018 Hi, I wasn't aware that this story has got only a few reviews. I really love your Taboo-Fanfiction and until today, it is the only good one I've found. I fell in love with Taboo, especially James Delaney... but maybe it is just because I have a crush on Tom Hardy... Nevertheless, you've transfered the characters very well! The role of a ruthless lawyer suits perfect to James Delaney and Lorna Bow is very close to her original. I hope their relationship has a bright future and I also can totally agree with leaving out that creepy affair between James and Zilpha... You've got a very nice writing style and I've learned some funny/useful vocabulary while reading too (I'm from Germany). There's only one thing I have to "criticise": I always had the impression that James is a very confident and case-hardened man. He's got everything under control and during your last chapters James became weaker and maybe a bit helpless. For my part I think James deserves another idea or great plan he could come up with. But that's just my opinion, don't take it too serious! I love your story and I can't wait to read the next chapters! I've read your story with a huge smile on my face and I just wanna encourage you to finish this exciting fanfiction! Hopefully, an end isn't in sight yet! All the best! ellinor |
louisapallot chapter 21 . 3/22/2018 Love love love this story! Shame it isn't M rated but I love it all the same Can't wait for the next chapter! please update soon! Louisa |
louisapallot chapter 17 . 2/12/2018 Hiya, I've been looking for a good Taboo story for ages and I've finally found one! I love your story, really looking forward to the next chapter! Please update soooooon Louisa |
Guest chapter 9 . 11/15/2017 Me encanta esta historia continuala por favor. |
Phalandra-Sina chapter 1 . 7/9/2017 I like how you transfer those characters into the modern world. I am looking forward to read more and see how the story develops. Sooo update soon please. |