The fuckwit couldn’t even dodge what was a painfully telegraphed curse... just how useless do you want to make him? Also, he was held under the curse for three minutes by Riddle after being held under it for assumedly another minute by Bellatrix. You mean to tell me it took Dumbledore four whole minutes to get to where they were when it only took Harry a dozen or so seconds? Just seems like you ignoring time so we can feel like Harry has suffered.

Okay... so most of the plot was forced and dragged (Umbridge could have been dealt with way sooner, for example and Harry would never have openly told Tonks about the abuse at Privet Drive), but this takes the cake. The Death Eaters manage to stun and drag them off of a busy street with nobody noticing, take all three of them rather than just Harry, not take their wands and wake them up in the room of death AKA the wrong room without binding them? I also find it very odd that your Harry, after putting so much emphasis on his extra training and extra HELP in training, is somehow weaker than canon Harry. What happened there?

I hope you update this soon.

Such a shame there is no more to read. I really enjoyed reading this superb fanfic
Anyway thanks

thank you - great story

Characters are wooden af. Such a cliche boring read.

Emotional shit. Another 'Pity Me I'm abused Harry' story.

Aw, it's over. :(

Just recently discovered this story, and I’m glad that I did.
I find it well written, well thought out, well composed, and very engaging.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Perhaps your tale will awaken my muse

Good story. Like how this is moving. Thanks for sharing.

I’d like to see more.

Love the chapter!

Welcome back. I thoroughly enjoy your story

Awaiting more

Great chapter and so much work for Harry during the week. Nice ending with Tonks helping him to relax. Thanks for sharing!