reality is often disappointing... oh well

I cannot help but feel disappointed this has been abandoned/forgotten. It's truly an interesting story, one I personally would like to have continued reading.

yo my dude? I'm on here and trying to get your attention. Where are you? you just vanished from your PM when we were discussing about that other story you wanted to write. is everything okay?

This story is amazing! I hadn't been paying attention to the description for Sceptile last chapter, so I incorrectly assumed that he was Wulfric's Abomasnow. I'm glad I'm wrong since Sceptile's way cooler! I can't way to see the team name (since I don't know Lucario or Sceptile's aliases)!

I honestly think it's gonna gain a lot of attention for being so unique right now, but there are some kinks that need to be worked out in my opinion.

MMOOOOOAAAARRRR! plz?

This fic is awesome! Please write more!

I don't know why, but I thought that the Sceptile was ash's

i love it and please update soon!

Love this story already

I have been waiting for a fanfiction like this, my prays have finally been answered. Please continue this to the very end.

I am sure that Blake is going wondered on the things she just saw, like this for example.

Blake: Did he make shurikens out of water? (After seeing Greninja perform a Water Shuriken)

I like the concept. Let's see what comes of it.

Moooooorrrrrrrreeeeeee please

This story looks good and I wonder what will be the team name of chsrozard greninja and the other two pokemon