Common pathetic author
Can't we get a fanfic where tge oc actually SHOWS HIS POTENTIAL?!
Sheez your pathetic for taking this route

No to this one though man. In addition to making him INCREDIBLY weak you also are going with the hide routine and that in of itself is a bunch of bull.

To The Alt-Right Guest:

Why don't you stop being a coward, grow some balls and try saying that garbage with a legit account? Or not. Because I know you Alt-Rights are no better than the Far Left and being a coward is definitely a shared trait.

Hope to see a new chapter soon

It is worst dxd fanfic I ever read.

This story is awesome! Can’t wait to see more!

You know, if you are going to be using all these naruto characters and ninja stuff, you might as well just make it a crossover story instead of it just being in a single category. It really doesn’t add anything to it if you don’t. If I wanted to read a story crossed over with naruto, I would just go to the cross over section. 1 or 2 characters is fine, but when you start getting into the double digits, it really doesn’t make it enjoyable to read.

shit fic edgy trash

Koneko Harem. Sorry but she’s the only character I actually liked from the beginning in the anime besides Israeli.

This is taking WAY too long man.

To The Cowardly Guests: Go back to the swamp you crawled out from morons.

I liked the chapter!

if you're gonna drop your fanfic forever at least be upfront about it
russki bastard

Please keep his harem SMALL, like 2 or 3 characters pleaaase

Good fic tho difficult to enjoy with all the confusing Ninja things for those who don't watch naruto so don't know the meaning of shinobies great sages, tenju families and all that stuff... really difficult to follow the lines of things you don't know nothing about can't really inmerse on the fic...At Shin is out of the devils grasp for the moment not to mention Rias incestuous feelings..hard to believe that almost every characters are asshole including Saira and Grayfia...