I loved this so much! It captures Larry perfectly and might I just say that your handling of the subject of depression was just spot on and heartbreaking? Holy shit dude, you handled that so well. Also to add, as someone who happens to be a descendant of Meriwether Lewis's family and has studied extensively on him and Clark- I think you did a really good job protraying the guy and interpreting his mental state in a very believable way and that I say thanks for finding a balance between the show's version of Lewis and the real person.

And finally, the little revelation that Larry has about Lewis at the end was a nice touch as well.

I hope you'll continue to write for Time Squad fics in the future, best of luck!

Oh my gosh that was just awesome! I really loved how you portrayed Lewis like he was in the real life. I really liked how he longed for Clark, for someone to rely upon. I also loved Larry a lot here. Like a mix of annoyance, pity, sympathy and care. That was so great. I was quite sad about the ending though at least Larry helped Lewis a bit.

Very great! You should be proud