this is a good story though I find it unrealistic for the words holy church to be mentioned in any wizard ceremony due to the Christian church's favorite past time of witch burnings or the fact they went into hiding because of the Christian Church and witch burnings

10 galleons for breakfast was a bit much considering the exchange rate is 1 galleon to 5 pounds. Just saying, you might want to revise that little bit.

Enjoyed the story hope to read more soon

The interactions between Harry and Dahne are bland and irrelevant, you give yourself time to describe Harry's trunk or seating arrangement, but Harry and Daphne don't have a decent conversation about or about their future marriage.

It is logical that Daphne takes it naturally since she knows it since she is aware of herself, but for Harry it must be barbaric since he does not have the inculcated ideals and a 1-month investigation or the letter from your parents that you do not remember they will not change it substantially.

Especially after he freed himself from his relatives, it must be outrageous that his future is already determined, at least he would try to find a way out himself, I know you can tell me that his parents tried but he doesn't know them.

When Astoria introduces Harry, she calls him heir to the Greengrass house.
I think this Harry is very monotonous, just because he's Ravenclaw doesn't mean he doesn't express himself, he just showed annoyance towards Albus, but no thoughts or happiness towards his parents.
I also find it strange that your letter is not more personal and not only dictate its possible tutors.

Wow so Snape just gets away with insulting the whole potter family in the middle of class and then insults Harry in the hospital wing and neither McGonagall or Dumbledore tell the moron to shut the fuck up, and Harry just sits there and doesn’t defend himself. Sorry but if someone spoke to me like that he they would either get verbally torn down or a smack in the face. Harry is too passive for me in these situations.

Excellent chapter! Glad to see you updating again. Enjoyed the twist where you got rid of both Quirrell and the Horcrux early. I'm looking forward to seeing what you'll do with that! Also enjoyed Luna turning her needle into a cork. classic Luna! I like all of the attention to detail and the length of the chapter. Longer is always better so long as it is written well. You've definitely got the written well part down. Also happy to see that Draco is looking to start over again... Now what are you going to do with that? Looks very interesting. Can't wait to see what's next!

Another thing, a five-inch essay is less than half a page. You would be better off saying five-inches of parchment instead.

Great chap. One thing, the first digit of a classroom number indicates the floor it’s on. So Class 2E should be on the second floor or should be renamed Class 3E.

really enjoyed this chapter, and would love to see a true friendship between him and Draco (unlike the semi-conditional one he had with Ron and his jealousy!)

Love it.
Please write more.

Your writing is pretty good but I feel like you're playing it way too safe with the story so far.

draco friend or not i don't care, but plz not a drarry i like this story to much to drop it.
with al those property's and mansions wat about potter elfs?
just curious write it like you want it, like you said if i don't like it i wouldn't read it

like i said 7 galeons for a wand is ridiculous although 12 galeons for a breakfast even more, i like the story though, it got a nice build-up

i always find the price of a wand is far to cheap com paired with everything else.
it is supposed the the main weapon/tool and 35 pound/7 galeons make it something like a cheap toy from a supermarket sale