| Reviews for Make Me Whole |
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Guest chapter 18 . 6/4 Why hello there I'm in loss for words, this was just too good. Everything was good, and the concept of making Bucky take off the mask himself was brilliant. My heart is fluttering with excitement, really. You described Steve's joy in such a way, it felt like my own. |
Olive chapter 1 . 10/27/2019 So I am reading some chapters of this over again after fun hushing this fanfic and just wondering...why does Bucky kiss Steve on the cheek when he finds out who he is? Is that supposed to be A subtle thing or something? Just curious. |
Meldiriel Erulisse chapter 18 . 10/21/2019 Speechless... I'm still all quivery and tingly from this glorious, superb, utterly perfect, chapter! It's so deliciously satisfying, the way it turned out! The alternate reveals were great, but this one is perfect. When Bucky ask him to hold him, and when Steve freezes and falls onto the couch in shock, and most of all, when he chokes out a cry and 'falls upon his neck' ... ahhh! I'm still drowning in feels. Not sure if I want to curl up in delirious happiness, or I want to shriek in delight! And now it's 4 in the morning, but I just had to finish it, and oh dear! Oh my! Oh help! Now all I need to complete my bliss is Bucky's perspective. Don't feel rushed though; I know it takes a long time, and I'm happy to wait for weeks if it turns out even a fifth as good as this! |
Meldiriel Erulisse chapter 17 . 10/20/2019 Oh, I love the way you're building up to the reveal! I also love dream Bucky, and phantom Bucky, and Steve being sad! It's so delicious when our heroes are hurting and we know something wonderful is approaching! Aren't we cruel? #notevensorry #sortasorry #butnotreally #it'sforyourowngood #you'llthankmelater |
Meldiriel Erulisse chapter 15 . 10/19/2019 It's as if his heart knows it's Bucky, even if his mind hasn't discovered it yet. But what a wonderful and generous mind to love a recent stranger that much so soon! |
Meldiriel Erulisse chapter 13 . 10/19/2019 Stabbed? What?! Hold - the - fort! The hero never gets stabbed! What!? Bold move there! Good job! Also, boy will Winter be guilty about what he did with that knife! Poor knife. |
Meldiriel Erulisse chapter 9 . 10/19/2019 That’s a pretty amazing sentence: He could trust them with his life, but not his heart. That’s deep. |
Guest chapter 14 . 7/6/2019 ...I had to balance keeping Sam out of most of the fighting while not just turning him into a passive wuss... You SHOT him in the leg. You delivered a NASTY BLOW to the face. You STOMPED his wounded leg. State of Passive Wuss averted! (lol) |
Lia Whyteleafe chapter 1 . 6/16/2019 This story is absolutely beautiful. I can't think of anything else to say. |
teresa.spanics chapter 18 . 6/4/2019 AWW, Bucky was scared that Steve would not want him back, but he did and now they are together again :-) |
teresa.spanics chapter 17 . 6/4/2019 AWW, poor Steve :-( |
teresa.spanics chapter 16 . 6/4/2019 I hope that Winter can tell Steve what he wants him to know soon :-( |
teresa.spanics chapter 15 . 6/4/2019 Hopefully, Winter will join the Avengers along with Sam :-) |
teresa.spanics chapter 14 . 6/4/2019 Winter saves the day :-) |
teresa.spanics chapter 13 . 6/4/2019 Oh, boy! How will Steve save Winter now?! |