Reviews for The God of Shinobi in DxD Rewritten |
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Borello chapter 1 . 5/19 interesting idea |
Zack Lynch chapter 1 . 3/22 Good chapter, I like how you didn't go off and start writing so much about the Naruto universe, made things much easier. Can't wait for more chapters. |
zerosama.754083 chapter 1 . 9/28/2019 Loved this fanfic! Great beginning and cant wait for more! Loved the Harem members! Do you think you might add yasaka later on or is this Harem set in stone? |
aulshi chapter 1 . 8/5/2019 wow Gabriel to fufufufu i like this stories |
Alberto Jose Poveda chapter 1 . 11/20/2018 sigue con esta historias como con las otras |
Tsukoblue chapter 1 . 6/21/2018 Can you add Asia and Irina to Naruto's harem? |
god of all chapter 1 . 6/15/2018 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
To Jose dude chapter 1 . 6/6/2018 Oi, Jose. Naruto stomp DxD, feat Wise. And still stomp, Statement Wise. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2018 I like this story mate please keep it going |
Jose19 chapter 1 . 6/2/2018 The only issue in this story is the lifespan no matter how overpowered Naruto is in the canon he is classified as a Human, and the Supernatural races have the advantage of a incredible lifespan because the Three Faction can live over ten thousand years. This gives the advantage of being more powerful than Humans since it gives them more time to grow stronger, and regardless of Naruto's strength the magic of Dxd can kill Naruto. I will give you a example the magic of the Norse Gods can kill Naruto with no problem since it is designed to kill any God, and it is the oldest and most powerful type. I will also warn you this the Sacred Gears can even out even against Naruto they were designed by the Biblical God to fight against people like Naruto or higher power, and then there is the Sacred Gear of Cao Cao. The Sacred Gear of Cao Cao can kill Naruto also with no problem it is the fabled Lance of Longinus that pierced Christ trust me it can kill Naruto, and it is a Godslayer weapon the wounds from this weapon can kill Kurama as well. |
biob1 chapter 1 . 5/29/2018 pretty good job |
BlankCode chapter 1 . 5/27/2018 Good chapter,,,i like it,,, |
Forbidden-000 chapter 1 . 5/27/2018 Good chapter bro |
SHADOWNINJAMASTER chapter 1 . 5/26/2018 Awesome start of the story keep it up |
the shadow overlord279 chapter 1 . 5/26/2018 Eh. There are grammar mistakes, awkward phrasings, and too many time skips. It messes with the pacing. In one chapter: doesn't know Akeno, BOOM, scene change, Akeno's in love. See what I mean? You need to develope the relationship, not just skip to the end |