i'd like to read more! there's too few well written bad ending fics.

So what happens next?

I've decided to return to the Pikmin fanfiction scene due to the release (and me beating) Hey Pikmin. Which despite its bad rep, is actually worth playing.

But about your story...

I admit I'm quite intrigued. I've been writing my own portrayal of the pikmin for quite some time, which are detailed in Pikmin Interludes and Extinction (Extinction being my version of the Bad Ending to Pikmin 1) and I'm always curious to see the interpretation of other fans of the series.

Still wondering if you'll go with the technological or organic route (AKA are the Onions creatures or starships?)...

Definitely waiting to see where you'll be going with this

Hey there! Great job with this story, I really enjoyed reading! This is a really chilling subject matter, something I've been wanting to write about myself for a while now. I'd never considered the idea that Olimin might not really be Olimar but just a Pikmin that inherited Olimar's memories. I love it. I'll be looking out for new chapters of this.

Good story thus far, hope you continue this! Also, pikmin 2 is the easiest game as there is no limit to how long you take to collect treasure, but I would think 1 is hardest. #screwtheprogg