| Reviews for The Long Vacation |
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   Stormbow chapter 1 . 7/22 Wow. Very nice gradual unveiling of what was revealed there near the end. Loved it! |
| Matt chapter 1 . 5/4 Yes! Excellent story. Thank you. |
| camp1500 chapter 1 . 11/19/2019 A very good read, I look foward to more. |
| kurolothgarian chapter 1 . 11/11/2019 Theodore Nott of the KOW, Commander in the BEEF. |
| RonRR chapter 1 . 10/25/2019 Interesting story. Thank you for writing, Ron |
| jabarber69 chapter 1 . 6/30/2019 WOW! That was one hell of a story! Well Done! |
| CoquetteKitten chapter 1 . 6/28/2019 That was utterly fantastic! So creative and well executed! Just loved it. I wish I could favorite it more. |
| kurolothgarian chapter 1 . 6/12/2019 so, Theodore Nott is a KOW, and a corps commander of BEEF. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2019 An interesting read, the kind that will take a bit of time to truly digest. I think there should be a bit more explanation, especially how Harry and Hermione came to be with the veela clan, and maybe a bit more detailed timeline?, maybe? Still a great story, though. Very nicely done. |
| FluffyPandaShip chapter 1 . 1/28/2019 that was brilliant, so many characters, kept me so hooked on with mystery. i loved every bit of it 3 |
| tyrannicpuppy chapter 1 . 12/9/2018 Beaut twist on the usual time travel stuff. Love the ruthlessness of the Clan too. Brilliant. |
| Tilty.bbb chapter 1 . 6/2/2018 Great one shot |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2018 Very good story, different. |
| Laurentius Williame chapter 1 . 3/3/2018 This is quite a story. Kudos to you. |
| Cateagle chapter 1 . 1/22/2018 *snicker* Perseverance, combined with a bit of misdirection, can work if given sufficient time; the misdirection bought them that time. The bit with Draco Malfoy becoming Druella Black was a very nice twist; I wonder if he/she ever realized just who had been behind all of this. |
