Glad to see some sense being knocked into Darcy! I know he loves her, I really do. But there are many different ways to show love, to love. And he chose the wrong way. He loved her, but he also emotionally abused her. He wanted her all to himself because he loved her and so he didn't give her a choice and cut her off from her family. Yes, he loved her, but to an outsider...He only wanted to trap her.

Oh we need more. It's a great start.

Too short, but really good.

Wow!

I want to scold your Darcy. He was selfish and thought of himself. Yet, his feelings toward Lizzy has changed to wanting to possess her to wanting to give her happiness and true love.

This was very well written.

Would love to read more because you wrote this piece so beautifully!

this was heartbreaking!

I hope you continue this story!

I love and hate you at the same time! Love because it's so good. Hate because it's so short!

depressing

Glad you got the formatting sorted out, it was difficult to read but I managed to make out most of it before you fixed it. There are spelling and grammar that needs fixing, but they not insurmountable and could be done, perhaps with the help of a cold reader of Beta.
As someone has already mentioned there were no cowboys in Regency England (or in America), they came along much later. It would be better to put Knights, Witches and Explorers.
Nevertheless, I like the premise of this story and would like to see it expanding as to why Darcy and Elizabeth were forced to marry. Why did he cut her family? What did Wickham do that we don't already know? Why can't he begin the process of healing between his wife and her family? So many things I would like to know.

This is fabulous! You really should/could expand this into more of a story.

Eu realmente, realmente acho que você deveria continuar esta! Muito bom!

Gee, that was sad. Thanks

Very enjoyable story.
Will it be a one-shot or will you show the improvements? E

This is unreadable - please fix it!