I love it

Wow, I really enjoyed this!

Jack davis Griffo you are a Trulye evil Revealed Shirtless with the Orb go Back to your Real home take your Family powers take what yours Jack Griffo

Girl...this was SO GOOD. I swear, you have to keep writing one-shots for Thunder in Paradise because they all turn out amazing. I love how the roles seem so reversed in this compared to how they would have been had you written this for earlier in the series. It really shows the growth in both Max, as Phoebe pointed out, and in their relationship. It was so sweet how Max kept insisting that nothing was Phoebe's fault, and, omf, that hug at the end was everything, especially because it came from such a caring place. You captured their voices so well - it genuinely felt real. The vulnerability of this entire piece is so endearing. Seriously, this was great.

I absolutely adore how this could be seen as just a regular sibling story. But what I can't get over is how you wrote it so that it could also be seen as romance! It's astonishing! Not many people can do that and actually succeed. I can't wait to see if you write anymore Thundermans fanfiction.

*my dramatic noise* OW. This was painful. Poor Phoebe. :( I know I'm usually not in favor of the goody-goody characters, but I'm just picturing if I was in Phoebe's situation, dealing with that aftermath... Damn. It's nice to see Max comforting her. I loved the cartoons and the Oreos lol. And CHLOE! Adorable. This storyline did wonders for your inspiration! I look forward to more Thundermans fics from you! :D