| Reviews for The Dark Heir |
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   major wallace chapter 11 . 7/14 Nice work |
| SupremeRuler17 chapter 1 . 7/10 A "German" dog? Why so specific? |
| 0vrLrd71 chapter 8 . 6/1 I really hope you don't let Harry allow other wizards to be with Lily or the other 2 older woman, and I hope they don't get too fustrated and go to another wizard, that'll be a little too much, even considering all that's happened |
| thomassmith69 chapter 11 . 5/13 Hi I noticed o this chapter you kept writing Tonks instead of Dora Other than that I found this story today. Enjoying it a lot :) |
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/4 That's a nice story. Hope Harry becomes more assertive, with all his magical training as well as being dominating in the house. I hope he has more girls at Hogwarts, other than his sisters and Olivia and Artemis, but that can come later. I want more action in it. By the way, you referred Nymphadora as Tonks, but in this story, she's not Tonks. |
| didyousaytim chapter 7 . 4/28 You have a lot of twists, personality train wrecks, a successful Lily, big extended family and Lucius on a leash. What's not to like. Nice sorting |
| blackwingedguardian chapter 11 . 4/29 please update soon |
| Xray75 chapter 3 . 4/15 When did you post your announcement on your profile? |
| Slider chapter 11 . 4/10 I hope you keep updating this, I was pleasantly hooked with this story. |
| blackwingedguardian chapter 1 . 4/2 please update soon. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/30 Needs more bloody chapters!. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/29 Liked the concept, hated the writing. |
| Sidvicious97 chapter 11 . 3/28 Amazing. Get the pace up man. |
| NazgulBelserion chapter 11 . 3/27 Honestly stories where you have some stuck up brat like Neville and James are horrible they should have an accident where maybe a troll kills one of them story should focus on Hadrian and he's ride to power having so called rivals is fake cause id get rid of them |
| BMS chapter 11 . 3/27 Honestly, this chapter is disappointing. Way too much like canon right down to Harry using the Wingardium Leviosa spell though having Finch get hit by the troll was an excellent touch. While I'm enjoying this story since they arrived at Hogwarts Harry et al have been far too mediocre. Not much better than canon outside his leadership ability. What happened to the lessons they all received from their mother and aunts? Why is Lily worried about Rita? Earlier you'd had both Lily and Bellatrix face her down and run her off when she had the support of the Longbottoms so why would this be different? You seem to be forgetting what you wrote in earlier chapters and that's messing w/ the quality some in the latter part of this story. Hopefully, this will regain the quality it had in the earlier chapters. Overall, an excellent story so far and I am looking forward to more though. Followed |
