| Reviews for Roar and Fire |
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maggiesmith chapter 18 . 5/30 It's a great pity that this seems destined to be forever unfinished. |
BrentNewland chapter 18 . 8/11/2019 Good story, please continue. Also, maybe clarify just what parts of Essos Tyrion now controls. |
BrentNewland chapter 14 . 8/11/2019 Thought Tyrion went North, why is he in Casterly Rock? |
Guest chapter 18 . 6/5/2019 Qyburn should be dead and Cersei should be pregnant and I think you should keep the amount of kids for Tyrion the same you should probably spend more time developing Tyrion's kids and you could probably make a storie out of how they grow up at the end f this story and how they rule if it is as good as this story I would love it. |
AraelDranoth chapter 1 . 3/29/2019 Not a bad idea but the language needs some work. |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/15/2019 It’s lazy as fuck writing to copy what Dany did and just making Tyrion do it instead. Lazy as fuck. |
REBD chapter 18 . 1/7/2019 They should be a dwarf, and everyone even Cersei children, the ones that are left should see just how mad Cersei really is |
Alulain P chapter 18 . 11/29/2018 More please! |
Inevitably weird chapter 1 . 9/30/2018 I want to like this story it reminds me heavily of another "and the giant awoke". I mean really heavily but yours is more poorly done. A lot of logic jumps are made for the sake of plot but make no sense. the premise that Tyrion would have anything to do with a father that has hated him his entire life nonsensical. getting past that okay everything makes sense until you get to the siege of mareen (where I have read to so far) and he has barrels of wildfire...where did he get them on another continent. a substance so powerful that ANYONE knowing how to make or use it would be a warlord. I get it you needed a way for him to take the city, it just makes no sense that he would know how to make/ have the materials to make it/ be able to produce it on the road while sieging. will continue to read just this bothered me. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2018 Love this story, when will you update? |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/15/2018 gud stuff |
mysweetkat chapter 18 . 5/15/2018 Just discovered your story and what a gem it is! I finished reading all the chapters in one day. It showcases your talent for storytelling and I wait with great expectation to read more exciting chapters ahead! Update soon! |
Artemis Persephone Jackson chapter 18 . 3/19/2018 You put so much work into this ... ... |
featherdusterpixie chapter 17 . 2/18/2018 can't wait for cersei to die in the series. love this story! |
0sef chapter 8 . 2/18/2018 The North accepting to bend the knee and follow the bastard who murdered their lord is just PLAIN SHIT. I'm done with that story |