This is pretty good so far. Maybe a bit too strong on the shipping so early on though.

This is a nice start. A good of drama to set the stage, with a pre-established relationship on the side. Looking forward to more. :)

I only just read this and am kicking myself for not doing so sooner

More Plwase!

Oh hey there, an update! Woohoo! Loved Yang's helpful discussion, short as it was, it was a fresh take on things to have her, as the outsider, be the one to initiate the idea. Good for her, looking out for her lil' sis.

Quick recommendation - I do still like the translations at the bottom, but I wonder if it might not also be helpful to include the in-story language? I.e. "(Valesian) Franch to Engligh:" That sorta thing.

Very happy to see another chapter for this, keep up the good work! Stay shiny, my friend!

Yay, a new chapter! Glad to see it and I still like the interactions that you have between all the ladies here. I do find it funny that Weiss has a little trouble with the languages, but it is understandable, all things considered.

You have Blake and Ruby so I like that adding Velvet call me intrigued

I must admit that you have a great start here and I cannot wait to see where you go with this. It will definitely be quite interesting to see the fall out from this concerning Velvet and Blake with their feelings for Ruby...Hopefully they won't get into a competitive fight or anything like that.

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Well, there another story on my fav and follow list.

This story earns my PolyShip Stamp of Approval (TM). /grin

I do really like where this is going, I like the setting and premise, and most of all I like the ship itself. Don't recall seeing Ruby x Blake x Velvet before (but I'm rather fond of both Ladybug and Freezerburn in any case), this should be a lot of fun. Eagerly awaiting more!