| Reviews for Helllooo Harry Potter! - Book 1 |
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  SL chapter 10 . 2/26 I find the multiple 3rd party POVs quite intriguing, but the overall effect seems to make the story a bit disjoint. I'm afraid I can't give specific suggestion though. |
 Jacob Phantom chapter 17 . 2/1 Please update your story soon! |
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/13/2019 I LOVVVVE IT |
| kittyreader42 chapter 14 . 8/10/2019 I love your style of writing |
| turtlefan16 chapter 13 . 1/13/2018 I really enjoy this story but I don’t really care for the Hermione bashing. Ron sure but I can kinda sympathize with her she like the outsider and don’t know how to interact with other. I hope this change later on with this story maybe set her up with Luna I always love that pairing. But please for the love all that is holy please don’t end with her and Ron. |
| Ravastallia chapter 13 . 1/10/2018 nice shoot! i love thisssss storyyyy! oh my belived author may you continue this story for me? pleasepuppy eyes no jutsu* |
| Ravastallia chapter 1 . 1/10/2018 nice shoot! i love thisssssss oh my beloved author may you continue this story? please? *puppy eye* |
| Venus914 chapter 10 . 8/7/2017 Why is the Invisibility Cloak with Granger and Weasley? Shouldn't they be punished for stealing it? |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/24/2017 Any reason why you keep misspelling Dudley? |
| laliiDh chapter 7 . 7/21/2017 I really like this story, it's interesting to see how petunia and dursley get along with harry, and I really like the fact that he became friends with neville first, the truth is neville is one of my favorite characters (the first of all It's severus, which is kind of weird since it almost tortured poor neville XD), I really do not like hermione and ron, she's very bossy and Ron is a jealous fool. |
| Littlest1 chapter 7 . 7/21/2017 That is really cute. |
| Littlest1 chapter 6 . 7/19/2017 I like this chapter and I am glad that you are keeping the snow owl. I do so love that type. I also love the various interactions and observations made by the family. The fact that Harry's attention was caught more by guys was funny. An ally in Draco is what I suspect you are doing along with Neville. Draco isn't always my fav character but that works for me. |
| whskykitty74 chapter 5 . 7/14/2017 Love the story! The unicorn family was so sweet |
| Littlest1 chapter 5 . 7/13/2017 Okay that was really fun. I wonder if you are going to have Dudley join Harry at Hogwarts. |
| Littlest1 chapter 4 . 7/11/2017 Whistle yep the boys are never going to have a normal life. Will Harry be close to at least the twins and Neville? I am sad about Mione but can deal and could care less about Ron but I love the Twins and Neville. They are both near the top of my fav character list and it would be saddening if Harry didn't at least interact with one of them. |
