thanks for the chapter

I like some good Enabler but if not then cinder’s fine too.

I say Cinder.

Please update this story

Yang ftw, sisterly bonds would be lovely to see in this story.

Not too bad so far interested to see where this goes and I offer a solution to your problem of Cinder or Yang. Why not both?

So, this is curious. I saw this story a while back but was somehow convinced it was a dead one... main reason why I didn't pay too much attention.
But here we are and would you look at that, it's not dead (yet).

I'll say this, I'm generally always up to give evil RWBY a chance. The fact that this is really well written just makes it all the easier :D
You have quite the eloquent way with words as you describe the scenes. I really like how you can take something that could be said in one sentence and somehow turn it into a paragraph without feeling boring.

Now for the end of this chapter, I don't know how I feel about it. So Yang and Ruby knew each other and I guess Summer and Raven had some falling out. Given that Raven is still around and Summer is usually the one dead, I guess it went in Raven's favor. Everybody so far, except for Ruby, is working with or for Cinder, which just makes me wonder what you mean in your AN of whether Ruby should go with Cinder or Yang. What's the difference?

In any case, this might be one of those rarely updated kind of stories but even so I'm looking forward to more :D
Cheers.

I'd like to see Yang hook up with Ruby. A good chapter

I say cinder. Also good chapter. Keep up the good work my friend

With Cinder, its one of my favorite couples

Wow. You draw me in like this in such a short chapter and then leave me on a cliff hanger before I can figure out what’s going on? In my own house? Utterly disrespectful.

please continue

A very unique and interesting take upon the world of Remnant. Interesting. Very interesting indeed...

Hey! Listen!

Your story violates my tight anus.

Please note my mom does not accept explicit content, Fuck Rating: MA, and good shit, and the rating is only presented for Jesus.

You can't have sexually explicit stories on the site. My passive aggressive threat is to move this to a site that allows MA stories such as AdultFanFiction or AO3, or I'm going to tell your grandparents. Or you can go to North Korea where they will censor it for you.

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Are they talking about Salem or someone else? Is Weiss with them so she could one day get Winter back? How will Yang and Ruby react when they meet each other. Because Raven taught her power is everything will she like Ruby because she is strong? Keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter.