Wow i loved just every single chapter. So beautifully written. Especially the Tsukino family stories, those were my favorite. I wish that was its own multi-chapter fic.
Thank you for these!

After long contemplation, I resolved to do an extra review of "Grief".

I don't like sad stories; in fact I'm bawling all over the keyboard just thinking about this one.

But the fact remains that to rip and tear at my heartstrings, it has to be a good story. And that it is without a doubt! It is a feat to kill a character you love and not chicken out by having them somehow come back to life, instead depicting how life has to go on without them.

This story alone is enough for me to label you an exceptional author, and I tip my hat to you.

Keep narrating,
Ranma-sensei

My personal favourites have to be the first two 'Motherhood' chapters. As for the third one; I was half expecting Usagi to turn up at her father's back as he stood in Mamoru's door and shove him inside the apartment to give him a lecture that would make her mother proud.

Honestly, this would be an interesting reveal story, with Usagi defending her boyfriend with a steely determination that seems so unlike her in her father's eyeswhether he makes the connection to Sailor Moon himself or if she slips up isn't even relevant, in my mind.

God, I hate having ideas and not being able to write them out; that's gotta be the worst kind of writer's block!

May your words ever flow,
Ranma-sensei

Okay I just binged ALL of your reveal stories and thanK YOU FOR YOUR SERVICE TO THIS FANDOM i looooove the way you write, the way they interact ugh just everything. You’re amazing honestly

I can't tell you how much I love these stories and your writing. I love each and every one of these reveals and have read them multiple times - it actually wouldn't let me leave another review because I had already written in. Thank you for writing such sweet moments that are so in character and warm the heart.

I also had an idea for a reveal and wasn't sure how else to suggest it... We all know about the tower and Crystal happening - but what if they didn't know until that moment who the other was, or what if they found out after he was taken and she learns it was him when he comes back as evil... tempting? If not, I might have to finally put a pen to paper, but I truly feel you could do it justice as you are amazing at your craft. Take care and keep writing (especially a craving for milkshakes!)

Can I just say that the damsel in distress being swapped out here for Sailor moon coming to his rescue in the battle made me so happy?! I mean. I love that tuxedo Kamen always swoops in to save her. He’s basically her best support! And I squeal
Inwardly whenever he does. But I also
Love to see this. Her saving him. And him not always being the perfect, graceful person in battle. And the. Her kiss sing home!? This was so refreshing and beautiful and you still kept their characters intact! I CANT EVEN! I’m so sad that I’m done. This reveal series. I can’t wait until the next instalment, though I am eagerly jumping into your other work in the meantime

This is so adorable. I absolutely love the idea that the media and paparazzi would be all over the senshi and tuxedo Kamen. Because OF COURSE they would?! And this was super clever and so true to Usagis character that she was caught in camera falling on her face.
I pictured this reveal, could see the expressions in their faces, feel what they were feeling.
That is good writing right there!

Omg! MORE! I want MORE OF THIS ! I FUCKING LIVE READI F ABOJTT ALL OF THIS FROM Usagis family’s POV! It makes my life and it makes me so happy?! And all of the emotions from Shingo you the anger and irritation and the grudgin respect?! Like holy fucking realistic ?! This is the best series. Like the whole reveal series. This is is so fucking amazing I can’t even handle it!

GAH ! This is my absolute favourite mini series within this series. Like they are all good, but seeing this all through Usagis family just makes my fucking life! LIKE OMG! feminist Kenji is my GD jam and it’s fixes that overprotective dad from
Anime. This whole chapter was amazing. From the original confrontation I Mamorus apartment to the confrontation in Tsukino’s. Your Mamoru is amazing and he makes my life! And omg — she’s not just some damsel!— YEEEES! And then Mamorus response ? Like this was GOLd! I hope there this more of this mother hood series... it’s sooo amazing!

SQUEAAAALLLL! I love this! I’m a sucker for the love square! And then the twist of knowing ! And I loved the mamoru Usagi dynamic in this one too?! The idea that they are in an established relationship while still fighting as Usa and tuxedo Kamen is one of my favourite things to read which made this reveal so much more exciting to read! ? I loved the opening in the restaurant, the inner dialogue and OMG when he almost kissed her before the reveal?! INTENSE AND BEAUTIFUL! Also LOVE THE MINAKO/REI shoutout! Another awesome chapter !

I love awkward, Unsure Mamoru! He makes my life and you wrote him perfectly in this reveal! And Usagi is so bold, and brave and I love reading her like that. It’s like the perfect contrast and I could read a thousand of these chapter. Seriously. My heart starts Racing and I get super excited! LOVE THIS

Whelp. I don’t know what I can say. Because how do you comment on absolute PERFECTION? Every single word of this chapter had my heart beating so fast with excitement and my breath caught in my throat with how much I FUCKING ADORED THIS. Man. This was just so good, SO GOOD, With the way that Ikuko follows her daughters movements in the tabloids. Silently with her heart in her throat and nervous and cutting clippings because she’s proud and afraid in equal parts and how she is so supportive and silent about it? And then the way she’s grateful for Tuxedo Kamen tbat keeps saving her but the moment she see the picture she is worried about consent and her daughters mental well being?! Like omg. And maybe Kenji knows too. And then lunch and sleeping in AND THEN THAT AMAZING MEETING. And I was dying when Ikuko was talking about how handsome he is and Usagi is like stop talking right now! And then their serious convo while pretending that they are talking about tuxedo Kamen and sailor moon for ikuko’s sake but she knows?! And this is just the most amazing Ikuko version I have ever read. SO GOOD!

Whhhhaaaatt?! That is so COOL?! I want to read a whole entire fic in this world?! Wow. What a piece of heartwrenching Mamoru perfection! MAN I SWEAR! The orphanage bit at the beginning, the failed adoption?! Like. I’m not crying YOU ARE! I love reading beautiful vulnerable Mamoru! Stop. I can’t. I need to sleep but I CANT. I’m totally going to be a mombie tomorrow and it’s so worth it because one more chapter?!

! Stop. I literally can’t even anymore! This is DO GOOD! And when I said stop, I meant keep going, and when I said literally I meant figuratively, because OF COURSE I CAN KEEP GOING WITH THIS FOREVER? that was so legitimate adorable. It’s like I’m skipping all the chapters a slow burn fic and reading the very best part? (Like don’t get me wrong. I love the slow burns too. But this is awesome?!) you make me so happy with your characterization of mamoru and Usagi. They read as more anime in nature but your mamoru has that vulnerable twist that makes me sigh happily because that was perfect and beautiful, and this whole series is my GD jam.

Maaaaaan these reveals make my life. This was so CUTE. Man. The tone of your stuff. It’s like sailor moon magic. Because okay. So I know that SM is fantastical in nature, but when I read this, it felt realistic? And I can’t quite explain what I mean, but, it’s like. It’s not easy to write a SM fic that doesn’t feel ... shallow? Like where I am consciously thinking “yeah, this is cute but super ridiculous”. I do not feel this way when I read your stuff. Especially in this last chapter. The depth of your characters make it feel real. Or at least, real enough that I’m kind of lost in this alternate world. Gah. I wish I could explain that better. I loved this reveal, and the friendship aspect. It was brilliant and ONE MORE CHAPTER. Then I’m totally going to bed. Maybe.