Reviews for Green
Sonic chapter 3 . 2/8
Good Chapter! youtube: Boku no Hero Academia 4 EP 1, 64 OST - "A NEW SYMBOL OF HOPE" (Piano & Orchestral Cover)
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My Hero Academia OST Heroes Rising : MightU [LYRICS]
PhaedoSymposium chapter 3 . 7/23/2019
Man this story is so well done I dont know hpw more people dont follow it. The story really balances themes of despair and hope on so many levels, very cool, very well done. Hope to see you update at some,point if you get inspired for the story again, have a great day I'm going to go peruse your other stories.
Bomberguy789 chapter 2 . 4/14/2019
I’m surprised the White Fang even know OF the maidens. Doesn’t seem like something anyone in the know would care to tell them.
Wrath of The Sun Deity chapter 3 . 3/11/2019
I hope to see more. I'm curious to see what role Noah, the bird, plays in Jaune's abilities.
deoxeyses chapter 3 . 2/25/2019
Really good, hope you continue it
Jayui chapter 3 . 8/15/2018
This story is fire my dude, I'd love to be able to read more!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/22/2018
Maybe have him Learn, Before Beacon, to Use his Semblance to take advantage and beef up his muscles, Find a way to Counteract that protein deficiency. But that means Hes gonna have to Work HARD, once his body finally starts working somewhat properly. A good year. Keep up the great work. Also, you could maybe Have his sword and shield combine to Become DURANDAL of the FORLORN. A Greatsword. Symbolising Hope.
That guy chapter 1 . 4/12/2018
Will we see jaune take medicines for his condition?
Or just plain eat protein heavy foods

Just a nice touch to acknowledge his protein deficency
LordAgreas chapter 2 . 4/1/2018
His like All Might! It’s brilliant absolutely brilliant! And the little girls is a maiden who would have thought. But please tell me at one point he shouts Plus Ultra!
Dethcat chapter 3 . 3/27/2018
Damn, comparing Jaune to All Might made love this idea even more!
W0lfbr0ther chapter 3 . 2/28/2018
I totally see the All Might resemblance but he also reminds me of Escanor from nanatsu no taizai. Look him up if you don't know him.
PasiveNox chapter 3 . 2/24/2018
Great go jaune
That guy chapter 3 . 2/23/2018
amazing
if he ever goes to beacon i can already see so many good interactions

and the correlation with all might was less on the description and more on how they have weak and muscle forms

which i must comment , was splendidly done

i see no other way this could end up great
yomunot chapter 3 . 2/20/2018
Jaune Might X)
TalonIbnLaAhad chapter 3 . 2/20/2018
"It's kinda like when a guy sucks in his gut to look impressive at the pool!" XD Yeah Jaune does seem to have quite a bit of parallel with All Might, but that's besides the point of this review. So! It is great to have this story updated again, and man do I love it! The themes of Hope and despair attached to his semblance make for an awesome power, although I imagine there's more to it than meets the eye. Plus, we still need to see it in action against the Grimm. I'm glad you're keeping this story alive, and hope you keep up the awesome work! Looking forward to the next update! Until then, good luck and take care!
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