| Reviews for My bride is a mermaid 2 |
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  ocmnC chapter 1 . 9/1/2018 Veri n1c3JEQst0riGq |
| WolfDragon chapter 2 . 8/30/2017 Sea creature from Haryy potter and the goblet of fire. |
 Fireember345 chapter 4 . 7/14/2017 Your story was good but it needs a bit more... build up, more conflict and drama... maybe, even more, information about grindylow. Are they dangerous? Are they friends? Are they foes? Will Nagasumi meet another grindylow? You need more into the story. Think about doing a remake. Like I said the story is good, I'm just giving my input. If you like any ideas for it, let me know. |
