Reviews for Failure To Communicate
Newusernameforme chapter 15 . 8/18
I have watched Rogue One so many times - it's my favorite Star Wars movie (controversial among many, u know and I'm sorry) and I LOVED the ending. I genuinely romanticize the idea of these two heroes, sacrificing themselves (and the what could be romance wise between them) to try to save the universe, without ever knowing whether it will work or not.

There is truly something to tragic and poetic about it.

Having said that, of course I ship Jyn/Cassian like no one's business. I wouldn't change the ending, but my heart wants to so badly - I think that weighs into why I love it so much.

In my ventures reading other fanfics on other sites, I haven't been able to find a slowburn story that stayed true to the plot/starwars universe. And the one other one I did got over the top cheesy (hardcore disappoint).

THIS STORY IS SO EXCELLENT. Slow burn, obvious personality quirks and insecurities paving the way, some good ol' sexual tension and misunderstandings and you stayed so true to the character personalities. The growth of their relationship felt very organic.

I love Kay, I couldn't be more thrilled with his dialogue and mannerisms.

10/10 for sure. THANK YOU FOR THIS
Guest chapter 11 . 12/11/2019
I *love* the quote from one of Tamora Pierce’s books in this chapter! Perfect fit! (I think it was Kel, but now I can’t remember...) Anyway, great!
KayBeeH chapter 13 . 5/30/2018
"If it is not fine, you may scream. We will be able to hear you from the waiting room." Kay looked at the medic. "It would be best if she didn't scream."

I literally laughed out loud at this part. I love Kay so much!
Guest chapter 15 . 4/8/2018
Really good. Sweet with nice humour. It's also really well written :)
rpicard06 chapter 13 . 4/7/2018
The comment about Solo’s kid being a terror made me laugh. He certainly didn’t come out sunshine and roses, that’s for sure!
engineerwenlock chapter 13 . 3/3/2018
The malfunctioning med droid is hilarious!
engineerwenlock chapter 1 . 3/2/2018
Unique opening.
I like reading the Rogue One characters interacting with the OT characters. I'm excited to see where this goes.
Flickerflame8 chapter 15 . 2/14/2018
This is like Rogue One: The Rom-Com. I never thought I'd find something like this when I started looking at fanfic for this couple (more like mega angst), but here it is. And it's hilarious. And adorable. And I love it!
Sibylle chapter 15 . 1/10/2018
Just finished your story which was really awesome ! I need more..!
Sibylle chapter 5 . 1/8/2018
Your story is so well, I started yesterday night and all day long I was thinking about it. It's great !
Kallie49 chapter 15 . 1/1/2018
Sure, it's fluff, but satisfying fluff. Great story! (Also, laughed at K2 the whole time, he was seriously great.) Maybe the next story deals with them and the battle of Hoth?
Kallie49 chapter 4 . 1/1/2018
Oh my goodness, you have K2's voice down absolutely perfectly. Love this chapter!
Kallie49 chapter 2 . 1/1/2018
This is so great so far! Jyn and Han really are a good pair. You write Cassian and Bodhi well, too, especially Cassian's self-awareness. Looking forward to the rest.
KINGlena chapter 15 . 12/11/2017
fantastic story! i really enjoyed reading it.
xbecbebex chapter 15 . 11/2/2017
I screamed with laughter frequently. Awesome story
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