update

oh god, i can already feel it. the gary stu is strong with this one

So, why not just leave the stories online and ignore them?

ruby is 15 beacon start at 17 not 18

God speed

Goodbye for know and just to let you know, you were a terrific writer and I hope to see back soon.

Writing is kinda okay i guess but the plot is really not great, i see you put a lot of effort into editing and spell checking and what not so that's good.

Also the fuck is a .45 rifle i've never even heard of that, Ruby has a .50 similar to a Barret.

A girl and guy, who are not in a relationship, fall asleep in the same bed.
Well I guess Shadow is going to wake up with his arms around Ruby with one of his hands being on her breast. And Ruby, being the adorable little Grimm Reaper she is will tell Shadow that she is not mad or upset about because it happened while they were asleep.
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I have official read to much fanfiction if that is where my mind went when you transitioned from the two over to Roman and Neo.

Had to drop at ch2. Your oc being mary-sue is fine. But to comical or arrogant is a bad mix. No offense.

Gah another discontinued story of yours :/ This is unfortunate because I haven't ever played Kingdom of Hearts and this story and your Fairy Tail have my favorite pairings.. :c Oh well, good luck on your new story. I will wait for these two to be continued.

So summer abandoned Ruby instead of just dying. That is good to know. I thought mother of the year award went to Raven. On another note, I loved the conversation between Shadow and Ruby. That was full of warm feels. :3

Although it is sad they he already figured out how to censor the thoughts he sends. That would have made for interesting situations and given the "ridiculously convenient mental link" an unavoidable weakeness in that ALL thoughts are shared but it is fine how it is I guess :P

A faster time than Qrow or Raven? What? Also, Weiss was never that bad in canon. She defeated the grimm by listening to Ruby.. Why make her an even worse fighter than she was?

Neo!~ Meh, that was a lot of random drama xD Why did he have to become mute though? I mean Jaune and Ruby didn't become mute but they are their own people though.

Interesting...I like the fact that he's a kyuubi as I've always had a fascination with them...and the I'm glad you utilize the silver eyes...not many fanfics use them...I say harem and hopefully this story won't be abandoned as it seems interesting

I don't care if they are ooc. It makes the story different so I like it.