Please finish... I love this story, my second time reading it hoping u will add to it soon!

This was a good chapter as well. Glad that Bella can move her arm now. So I wonder if it will heal more now that the piece of claw is out of her shoulder.

Okay so I’m reading this for the upteenth time, and it’s only just clicked in my head. You have stated that the sire’s traits are past down to the newborn. James’ violence to Bella; does this mean that Carlisle’s arrogance/self importance is behind the Cullen Made vamps... and why it was easier for Jasper to ignore his command when they were sentenced?

wow interesting. I sure hope she does heal though were she can eat on her own, and start to use her arm again. Also I wonder what kind of punishment the Cullen's would be getting. Also I wonder what Aro and the other two kings will say about Bella.

wow so Bella can't even eat or lift one arm, I wonder if it will heal sure hope so.

wow this was interesting. Glad that Demetri helped Bella to feed, and not from animals but a human. I sure hope that she is going to be alright.

truly wish this was finished Definitely 1 of my favourite Demetri and Bella stories

I love this story and would love to see it finished one day️

I hope you come back to this story I'd love to know how Bella turns out.

Hi, just read this in nearly one go (benefit of being quarantined, lots of reading time). Gripping story! Really eager to find out what happens next! Cheers Sari

Your use of empathy and sympathy is reversed

Update

Demetri does love her, he just has a different way of showing it. But I’m gonna need to have some loving with these two! And what will Caius and Alec and Felix do without her? Or Peter? Can’t wait for more! Hope all is well and safe with you and yours in this crazy time.

At least we know more about him, I just wish these two would open up more for one another. And I feel like we just got cockblocked.

I so hope they aren’t pulled apart. But how very cool that she is his literal soul, I mean he does call her that.