I really want to read more but I cannot stomach anymore of this Dumbledore. Severus is a fucking adult. The Slytherin Bat! Why would any of them think that he would want or need to be with people his own age? And the fucking Weasleys? WTF? Its so stupid. Same with Quidditch. Snape can help Harry better from the stands were he can watch everything to protect Harry.

I thought would be the case. Without Ron and Hagrid’s hating on Slytherin Harry wouldn’t think it was bad.

Ugh. I hate Ron. I was really hoping we could not be friends with him. Shoot! What house will they be in!

Oh ok so now he’s going to pack ? Doesn’t Severus need robes and clothes that will fit his new body?

Shouldn’t Snape realize the abuse of some extent?

Wait what about him packing up his stuff from his room? I highly doubt he’s going to allow anyone to touch his things in his old quarters. Also he’s going to need school stuff. Should he have just packed some of his stuff and brought it with him and bought anything else he needed with Harry? Sorry I’m not sure why this bothers me so.

Weird... where’s Draco? And I hope somehow Quirrelmort doesn’t know...

Hmmm. Maybe things will work out after all

Hrumph. I’m guessing Sirius won’t be redeemable in your story by that dream. Even if he could rescue Harry from the effing Dursleys

Wait... where’s Dobby?

This bit doesn’t make sense. Minerva would have *listened* to Severus... and Sev never would have let them go down there.

Other than that it’s an interesting tale. A bit too close to the original... I’m expecting it to diverge a bit come summer.

Small problem here. Ron’s stuff was all hand me down.

Oh to be one of the ones to actually get to see Hogwarts.

awe. thats right Harry stick it to the snob

awe. snape. hagrid is sweet of course he would buy you ice cream.