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It’s an okay book but I’ve seen better

Love potions should be iliegal to begin with...Fred and Geroge (along with J.K Rowling because she chose to put shit like that in book 6) are frickin' idiots.

Uhhh...Why didn't Harry use the Mauraders Map to spy on them? Harry could've just rush to his dorm, look for the map, say "I solemnly swear I am up to no good", and then find them instead of talking to Ron and afterwards wait for them to come back?! DO U SEE WHY THIS HURTS IF U REALLY THINK ABOUT IT! He could've saved Hermione from getting raped! I'm sorry but this is just a stupid way to start the story.

Um... instead of going back to the common room and getting into an arguement with Ron over what he THOUGHT might be happened to Hermione, then STUPIDLY plopping dowb and simply WAITING for either Hermione or Cormac to come back like a useless MUGGLE who couldn't do anything at all, why didn't Harry do the QUICK and EASY way of finding the other two, and RUN up the boys dorms and get the MARAUDERS MAP and follow Hermione and Cormacs name blips on the map to where ever they were in the castle?

Chop off Cormac's balls. Oh my god that was so uncomfortable to read. I mean that as a compliment.

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If Harry was worried about Hermione why didn't he use the marauders map to find and save her.

Hm...now...I'm someone who has high functioning Autism Spectrum Disorder, (previously known as Aspergers), so this is probably just me, but wouldn't it make more sense for someone who has survived sexual abuse to seek out a sexual encounter in which they could feel like they have the position of power? What I'm trying to get at here is that I'm confused because I've always thought that when someone survives a situation that they feel powerless in that that same person would find it extremely therapeutic to go through the same type of situation again, but this time around having all of the power, or at least a very good illusion of having all of the power. Like, if someone was kidnapped at one point, and they survived the experience, they could then pay to be 'kidnapped', and yes, people can and do actually pay to be kidnapped. Then there's rape-play, which is when two consenting adults act out a rape scenario, which is also a thing that happens, which was seen on an episode of the hit medical drama House M.D.

I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update.

This really is a great story. Better than expected. I hope you are able to find time to continue. But either way, thanks for all you've done so far.

It's true that they don't know where the attacks will be, they do however know where a lot of the deatheaters are (Hogwarts) and where Umbridge is (Ministry). Neither are unassailable, they are indeed quite open really. So why not take action? Why is umbridge still minister?

As much as I'm a fan of the story, I'm not a fan of this chapter, if I have to be honest. A bit to useless on the light side. No action against Umbridge herself.
And then there is McGonnagal... stopping Filius from retaliating because of the students. So you have 10 deatheaters, something like 10 teachers and then you have say a good hundred students who all know stunning spells as well. So instead of sending with a 110 people stunning spells at 10 others (how long would that fight last?) McGonnagal is just sacrificing the muggleborn students and leaving them with mass murderers?
But hey, they're happy they got the locket. They just lost both the ministry and hogwarts because they don't act.