Reviews for The strange son of hades |
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REE chapter 3 . 7/15 The grammar makes me wanna explode |
hotxhotguy chapter 3 . 6/20 This is not right. You can't force someone to socialize. If I was your Oc, I would have punch Selina. |
The Quincy god chapter 3 . 6/17 no bully deserved to get their asses beat |
thomas chapter 35 . 3/6 i loved it can you make a second |
Guest chapter 19 . 2/29 Ugh it started so well but now he's a useless edgelord |
ddsurvivor chapter 17 . 2/3 Ok find this Fan fic very interesting and even though he is the 3rd Hades child born. He will be the oldest. LOL |
ddsurvivor chapter 1 . 2/3 Just found your Fan-Fic. Interesting. Going to be 3 children of Hades. let me read more, before I decide to continue reading. So Far I like it. Grammar is okay and easy to comprehend the story. |
XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 1 . 2/2 Yeah, you summed it up to the best of your abilities in the AN. The grammar makes me want to claw my eyes out when I try to read it so I'm out. Best of luck with your story though. |
Death Fury chapter 34 . 1/13 great job with the chapter |
XMassEffectProX chapter 7 . 1/13 Decent Story but it does need a polishing for the grammar mistakes |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13 If he was the brother or even cousin of the di Angelo's he would be much older they were put in the lotus casino just after world war 2. |
AlphaHost chapter 7 . 1/12 I'ts a intresting story but the grammar is too bad, can't read it anymore, it hurts to read. try to get a proofreader |
Dude chapter 13 . 12/24/2019 Hey this is pretty good A little rough around the edges but still interesting story. I understand the grammar, English probably isn't your first language?(that my geuss at least) i think the story is going pretty good. |
NightFyl chapter 23 . 11/20/2019 what's with the ? |
Death Fury chapter 33 . 9/24/2019 nice |