The idea is good, but it could use being more fleshed out. And what's with the random letters and number at the beginning of each paragraph in the second chapter? That really disturbed the reading.

Keep practising your writing. Practice is what makes you better. :)

I really like your idea and your good at righting. Hope you keep going

I really like this story.
please write more soon!

I love the story so far, I can't wait for the next chapter. thank you for writing it.
~Ranger River

I love it. can't wait till the next chapter.

That is am amazing character I can't wait for the next one. Thank you for writing it.

Please write more

Please continue. Seems really good so far, good charachter and good plot. I think including her training would take to long, but I think it would be better to just include how she trained and what she learned as a wolf-speaker. Refrence her training to the first Ranger's Apprentice book where Will trains with his saxe and bow till he gets the hang of it. Just like the quote from the book. "An ordinary archer practices until he gets it right. A ranger practices till he never gets it wrong." -Supportive Reader

That was very well written, I'm hooked! I can't wait for the next update. I love the plot, though I have a lot of questions. I'm sure they'll all be answered though! It's a short review, but please know that I'm highly invested in where this will go. It sounds amazing!