| Reviews for Hell To Pay |
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unconventional chapter 30 . 2/11 pls update im losinv my mind |
Sadbys chapter 30 . 2/6/2019 I’ve been reading this every spare moment, I can’t praise it enough. You’ve definitely watched all of South Park with those references, and I LOVE the demon lore you’ve created; all these little details about Hell and Kenny.. AH! It’s great! I’ve got to say my favourite part is the witty dialogue throughout, you write the characters’ personalities so well through this. Well done my friend, I look forward to the next instalment. |
Sadbys chapter 1 . 2/5/2019 Oh thank Satan for 29 more chapters! I can’t say many stories have made me laugh out loud on the first chapter. I absolutely love the Hell section and I’m excited about the story’s direction. Such a good idea to be honest! |
Emil chapter 27 . 9/7/2018 You gotta continue this! Great story and nicely written. |
TakeMeToFood chapter 27 . 8/18/2018 Nznzm I loved it and Kenny was so gr8 and OMG lesbians (I loved this chapter) |
TreeFiddy4 chapter 25 . 7/6/2018 Cool chapter! :) |
CameronHaku69 chapter 24 . 6/8/2018 AHHHHHHHHH *NEED MORE SHIIIT* PLS MAKE MORE CHAPTERS I NEEEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPPENNEDDDD |
Nightmother chapter 24 . 6/7/2018 God dam this is good. Cant wait for fiture updates. |
A.Lovely.Villain chapter 3 . 5/31/2018 I LOVE your DIP and am really digging your Cartman and Kyle, can't wait to see where you take this! |
Guest chapter 22 . 4/28/2018 The sneak peek of the next chapter sounds interesting |
Guest chapter 21 . 4/7/2018 I am LOVING this so far! I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon! Please!? My life like depends on it, well maybe not my life, but my entertainment! |
ric122-inactive chapter 21 . 4/3/2018 Welcome back and its good |
Draconis86 chapter 19 . 1/17/2018 I really love your fanfiction, and your Pip! |
RachelHayley chapter 18 . 1/6/2018 I've been following this fic for a while, I'm surprised this is my first review. I may have to re-read the previous chapters to refresh my memory tho. I loved Cartman drawing on the sand with his foot while speaking, it's kinda funny and cute! I so want to know what does Kenny have to do with Cartman. Waiting for next update! |
ric122-inactive chapter 18 . 1/4/2018 this story is getting good! Stanley got blue balls by SammarshAU s/12786208/1/Stanley-got-blue-balls |