Reviews for Hell To Pay
unconventional chapter 30 . 2/11
pls update im losinv my mind
Sadbys chapter 30 . 2/6/2019
I’ve been reading this every spare moment, I can’t praise it enough. You’ve definitely watched all of South Park with those references, and I LOVE the demon lore you’ve created; all these little details about Hell and Kenny.. AH! It’s great! I’ve got to say my favourite part is the witty dialogue throughout, you write the characters’ personalities so well through this. Well done my friend, I look forward to the next instalment.
Sadbys chapter 1 . 2/5/2019
Oh thank Satan for 29 more chapters! I can’t say many stories have made me laugh out loud on the first chapter. I absolutely love the Hell section and I’m excited about the story’s direction. Such a good idea to be honest!
Emil chapter 27 . 9/7/2018
You gotta continue this!
Great story and nicely written.
TakeMeToFood chapter 27 . 8/18/2018
Nznzm I loved it and Kenny was so gr8 and OMG lesbians (I loved this chapter)
TreeFiddy4 chapter 25 . 7/6/2018
Cool chapter! :)
CameronHaku69 chapter 24 . 6/8/2018
AHHHHHHHHH *NEED MORE SHIIIT* PLS MAKE MORE CHAPTERS I NEEEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPPENNEDDDD
Nightmother chapter 24 . 6/7/2018
God dam this is good. Cant wait for fiture updates.
A.Lovely.Villain chapter 3 . 5/31/2018
I LOVE your DIP and am really digging your Cartman and Kyle, can't wait to see where you take this!
Guest chapter 22 . 4/28/2018
The sneak peek of the next chapter sounds interesting
Guest chapter 21 . 4/7/2018
I am LOVING this so far! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Update soon! Please!?
My life like depends on it, well maybe not my life, but my entertainment!
ric122-inactive chapter 21 . 4/3/2018
Welcome back and its good
Draconis86 chapter 19 . 1/17/2018
I really love your fanfiction, and your Pip!
RachelHayley chapter 18 . 1/6/2018
I've been following this fic for a while, I'm surprised this is my first review. I may have to re-read the previous chapters to refresh my memory tho. I loved Cartman drawing on the sand with his foot while speaking, it's kinda funny and cute! I so want to know what does Kenny have to do with Cartman. Waiting for next update!
ric122-inactive chapter 18 . 1/4/2018
this story is getting good! Stanley got blue balls by SammarshAU s/12786208/1/Stanley-got-blue-balls
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