I'm starting to think this more of a comedy at times.

Congrats on 50 chapters. It's been a wild ride so far, and I'm looking forward to seeing where the rest of this fic goes.

I've gotta say, it's great how you manage to give each new universe its own little story arc. That's the way it ought to be - we shouldn't just be visiting these worlds briefly, we should really get to know them and grow attached to them. There ought to be long-term changes as a result of the characters interacting with these new worlds. So far, you've done a very good job of this - Blake, Yang, and Weiss have all changed as a result of coming into contact with different universes. I say keep it up, you're doing exactly what you should be.

Probably where I have the most trouble is keeping track of all the different Rubies. Some of them are easy to keep track of, but others are more difficult. Remembering Spider-Ruby is easy; remembering Crimson Thorne was harder. Admittedly, this is really on me, but still, keeping track of them is difficult enough that I felt it warranted a mention here.

Aside from that, I don't have much else. The Roman and Neo segments are still entertaining, the alternate universes are all interesting and well-done, the overarching plot is progressing and getting more complicated, and the fic is still great. I don't have much more to say beyond that.

As always, looking forward to more in the future.

Woo, 50 whole chapters, mah dude! All of the Congladurations!

Man, Yang's sure had a time recently, hasn't she? Falling overboard, staring into the abyss, thinking herself stranded for nearly a year, falling in love only to have to leave him... I sure hope something positive happens to her soon.

Also, yay! Neo got her parasol back! ...kinda! Still tho! I can't wait to see what fanfics they end up in next.

Be sure to keep up the good work, mah dude!

hey great new chapter,i just send you a new pm,i hope to hear from you soon

UGH! Now I actually have to wait for updates like everyone else.

Not to get political or racial or anything like that but... I feel like this is EXACTLY what needs to happen in America with racism. I’m just realizing just how big of an impact those three words can have.

OMG! A terminator Ruby?! AMAZING!

Just letting ya know but we now know all of CFVY’s semblances thanks to ‘After the Fall’.

So Red has basically the AMP factor from the 2000s Action Man series. (Advances Mathematics Prediction. Or something using math to predict outcomes)

That’s awesome.

I'm happy to see this story going forward. Not gonna lie, it's really big, I'm amazed by how large this story, with so many characters. Hope to see more of it, and maybe some answers too, in due time :)

most people believe Yang is Bi or Pan. and the story is told differently than the actual RWBY where Blake and Yang are falling in love.

you dont need to apologize for it

whoa great job

whoa great job on this story

Oh, Mirage is one of those irritating, unwinnable early-game boss fights. Gonna be fun to see her later.

The Roman & Neo scene in this one made things quite interesting. I am looking forward to more info on that one.

If I could just spam the heart emoji right now, I would. Thanks so much for the plug!

As for the chapter itself, it seems like the Good Guys have let one of the McGuffin cards get away from them (with a new Ruby to contend with as well), a certain toy seems to be trying to find its user, and Neo's a seething little ball of jealous rage, so nothing's really changed there.

Keep up the good work, dood! I continually look forward to where this story will go.