I binged this in two days, with no regard for neither school nor friends, that's how much I enjoyed your story. Holy moly macaroni what a read this was, and it was so long aswell :D I was sad when I finished thisthat I'll admit, so I checked out the sequel expecting 50~100k words? NOPE. 400k words, more than this story. You're an actual living legend, thank you so much. I'm gonna sleep a solid 7 hours tonight before starting your next story!

Thanks for the read!

Lmao percy's such a bitch

As a (former) APUSH student, I would like to point out that everybody says it like “A push” and my teacher would gut you if you said that in front of him.

Fuck you for making Thalia betray them
Fuck you for that
I could understand and tolerate the ooc ness at some point but fuck you!

I’ve no problem with Percy being that spider but c’mon that he beliefs that they’re friends is dumb

Like that Percy somewhat.
Its a bit like dark Percy, the he’s not so caring and more sadistic
Also whats the pairing here?

You have the same title of chapter humor that rick has I like it

TBF; if I were Percy I would probably have joined Luke out of spite for Poseidon.
I mean - why would I want to fight for a guy who tells me not to call him father when one worked hard to clear his name.

I like the concept, even if there are many little things I dislike. The one thing that is seriously bothering me though is how utterly unintelligent Percy is. He's legit stupid, which I can't decide if you did intentionally or not. There's uncaring attitude, and then there's being truly unintelligent. Percy just isn't smart, at all, and I can't get past it. I would enjoy this story a whole lot more if Percy was maybe playing dumb or just actually smart.

Everyone except for Chiron and Tyson are a dick here in this story huh. Just straight up unlike able lol

Ok that’s the reason why he’s named “The Cruel Spider” not for anything he did or anything about spiders? It’s just a random thing? I... I don’t even know what to say about that.

My god this was good. All your characters were written extremely well, and I enjoyed how there were no chapters that read like a copy of the series. One of the best fan written things I've read; your worldbuilding and characterization is superb.

Love percy and bianca/nico sibling relationships lol

read the entire series in a day and loved it will be moving on too the squeal series when possible great work on this one

Randomly saw this in a reddit commment. Came and binge read it. Don't know what else to say except I'm shook.